Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，如“forgot”应为“forget”，“memories”应为“memorizing”。建议注意时态一致性和单词拼写，同时回答较为冗长，建议简洁表达。

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget the next steps I need to take in a project.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“attend to the school”应为“go to school”，“to my parent, to my parents”重复且不准确，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意语法和表达的准确性。

예시: Yes, when I was 13, I forgot to go to school for an important progress test, which made me and my parents very disappointed.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“do the practice on the English”应为“practice English”，“so it's quite things I need to”句子不完整。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to practice English regularly because I have a test next month and want to improve my skills.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇“take take”，且表达略显口语化。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意单复数形式。

예시: Usually, I write notes in my calendar and highlight important dates or tasks to help me remember them.

× Actually I'm not good at memorizing things because sometimes I will forget what the next steps I need to do and I will forgot the process of the project.

✓ Actually I'm not good at memorizing things because sometimes I forget what the next steps I need to do and I forget the process of the project.

这里的错误是动词时态使用不当。'will forgot'是不正确的，应该用一般现在时'forget'，因为描述的是经常发生的事情。建议将'will forgot'改为'forget'。

× So I think that I'm not good at memories things.

✓ So I think that I'm not good at memorizing things.

这里'memories'是名词，应该用动名词'memorizing'来表示记忆的动作。建议将'memories'改为'memorizing'。

× I forgot to attend to the school to take my progress test, which was very stressful for me because the test was very important for my parent, to my parents and I really feel disappointed since I affect their experience.

✓ I forgot to attend school to take my progress test, which was very stressful for me because the test was very important for my parents, and I really felt disappointed since I affected their expectations.

'attend to the school'中的' to'是不必要的，正确用法是'attend school'。'parent'应为复数'parents'。'feel'应为过去时'felt'，'affect'应为过去时'affected'。'experience'应为'expectations'更符合语境。建议修改以上错误。

× I think the things that I have to remember in my daily life is remember to do the practice on the English.

✓ I think the things that I have to remember in my daily life is to remember to practice English.

'do the practice on the English'表达不自然，正确表达是'practice English'。'remember'后面应接不定式'to remember'。建议修改为'to remember to practice English'。

× It's quite important for me 'cause I need to improve my English skills and having a test next month, so it's quite things I need to.

✓ It's quite important for me because I need to improve my English skills and I have a test next month, so these are quite important things I need to do.

句子结构混乱，'having a test'应改为'I have a test'，'so it's quite things I need to'不完整，应补充完整表达。建议调整句子结构使其通顺。

× Usually I would take take down the notes on my calendars and I will like highlight the important date or the important things that I have to do.

✓ Usually I would take down notes on my calendar and I would like to highlight the important dates or important things that I have to do.

'take take down'重复，应去掉一个'take'。'notes on my calendars'应为'singular calendar'，'highlight'前应加'like to'。'date'应为复数'dates'。建议修改以上错误。