Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ bạn không giỏi ghi nhớ và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc.

예시: I'm not very good at memorising new information. For instance, I usually need to review things several times because if I only study once, I tend to forget quickly.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu chuyện mạch lạc hơn. Hãy chú ý dùng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, last week my father asked me to buy something at the store, but I forgot it as soon as I arrived there.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ 'laser activity' có thể là lỗi nghe hoặc nói). Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đúng, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule. For example, I have to keep track of my university timetable and know which subjects I have each day.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và sửa lỗi mạo từ. Thêm liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

예시: As I mentioned, I am absent-minded, so I use a notebook to write down what I have to do each day.

× Actually, I'm not a good person memorizing new things.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at memorizing new things.

The phrase 'a good person memorizing new things' is incorrect because 'memorizing' should be used after 'good at' to indicate ability. The correct structure is 'good at memorizing'.

× For example, when I learn new things, I have to learn more than once, because if I if I just learn it one, I can easily forget that.

✓ For example, when I learn new things, I have to learn them more than once because if I just learn them once, I can easily forget them.

The sentence has repetition ('if I if I') and incorrect use of 'one' instead of 'once'. Also, 'learn it one' is incorrect; it should be 'learn them once' to match plural 'things'.

× Definitely yes. I haven't forgotten something important more than once.

✓ Definitely yes. I have forgotten something important more than once.

The sentence uses the present perfect negative 'haven't forgotten' which contradicts the intended meaning. The correct form is affirmative 'have forgotten' to indicate past occurrences.

× For example last week when my father told me to buy something at store and when I buy the store I forgot immediately.

✓ For example, last week when my father told me to buy something at the store, and when I bought it, I forgot immediately.

The phrase 'at store' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'when I buy the store' is incorrect; it should be 'when I bought it' to indicate past tense and correct object.

× In my laser activity, I have to remember the the schedule.

✓ In my leisure activity, I have to remember the schedule.

The word 'laser' is a typo; it should be 'leisure'. Also, 'the the' is a repeated article.

× For example, I have remember the timetable at my university.

✓ For example, I have to remember the timetable at my university.

The verb 'have' needs the infinitive 'to remember' to be grammatically correct.

× What is subject today I have learned.

✓ I have learned what the subject is today.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects word order.

× As I mentioned I was a absent minded so I have a notebook that I write down what I have to do in a day on that.

✓ As I mentioned, I was absent-minded, so I have a notebook where I write down what I have to do in a day.

The article 'a' before 'absent minded' is incorrect; 'absent-minded' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. Also, 'on that' is incorrect; 'where' is the correct relative pronoun for place.