Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat natural but a bit repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to start with a direct response, then give a specific example, and finally explain your method clearly using linking words. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I need to'.

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, yesterday I forgot about an important meeting with my boss, and my friend had to remind me. To improve, I usually repeat information and organize it to help me remember better.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words like 'for example' and avoid repeating words. Also, clarify your sentences for better coherence.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I forgot my best friend's birthday last August because I was busy with other plans. Fortunately, he reminded me on the day.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use proper grammar, and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember work tasks such as completing assignments before deadlines. Also, I have to remember to buy things from the grocery store. To avoid forgetting, I usually write these tasks down.

제안: Your answer is good but has some minor errors and unclear phrases like 'these dogs'. Use correct vocabulary and link your ideas smoothly for better clarity.

예시: I used to write important things in my diary, but now I use a To-Do List app on my phone. I list all my tasks with deadlines and set reminders, so I don't forget anything important.

× Not really. So just yesterday I had this meeting with my boss and I forgot that and my friend had to remind me that I have the important meeting that I need to attend.

✓ Not really. So just yesterday I had this meeting with my boss and I forgot that, and my friend had to remind me that I had the important meeting that I needed to attend.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verbs should be in the past tense to maintain consistency. 'Have' should be 'had' and 'need' should be 'needed' to correctly reflect past tense usage.

× So my best friend birthday was this this August and I forgot about it.

✓ So my best friend's birthday was this August and I forgot about it.

The phrase 'my best friend birthday' is missing the possessive form. It should be 'my best friend's birthday' to correctly indicate possession.

× So he had to remind it to me that that today was his birthday.

✓ So he had to remind me that today was his birthday.

The verb 'remind' is followed directly by the person being reminded, not an object pronoun like 'it'. Therefore, 'remind it to me' is incorrect; it should be 'remind me'.

× And I think his birthday was something important that I just forgot because I had some plan done previously but I forgot.

✓ And I think his birthday was something important that I just forgot because I had made some plans previously but I forgot.

The phrase 'had some plan done' is incorrect. The past perfect tense requires 'had made' to indicate an action completed before another past action. Also, 'plan' should be plural 'plans' to match context.

× Mostly about the work stuff, I had to complete some assignments within the deadline and maybe some manual stuff that I need to like bring something from the grocery store, maybe complete some talks within the deadline.

✓ Mostly about work stuff, I have to complete some assignments within the deadline and maybe some manual tasks like bringing something from the grocery store, maybe completing some talks within the deadline.

The word 'stuff' is informal and vague; 'tasks' is more appropriate. Also, 'talks' seems incorrect in this context; possibly 'tasks' or 'tasks' is intended. The verb tense should be present to reflect ongoing responsibilities.

× And I didn't do just forget these details.

✓ And I don't just forget these details.

The sentence is about a habitual action, so present tense 'don't' is appropriate instead of past tense 'didn't'. Also, the phrase 'didn't do just forget' is ungrammatical and should be simplified.

× So I need to write down somewhere and.

✓ So I need to write them down somewhere.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'them' clarifies what needs to be written down, and removing the conjunction 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× Umm, I used to write it down previously on my diary, but nowadays we have much better option that is in the phone we have To Do List app.

✓ Umm, I used to write it down previously in my diary, but nowadays we have a much better option, which is the To Do List app on the phone.

'Much better option' needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'on my diary' should be 'in my diary' as we write 'in' for books or diaries. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× So I have this app installed and in that app I will typically list down all the things that I need to do within my deadline.

✓ So I have this app installed, and in that app, I typically list all the things that I need to do before my deadline.

The phrase 'list down' is incorrect; 'list' alone is sufficient. Also, 'within my deadline' is better expressed as 'before my deadline' to indicate time limit.

× As well as I will also give the time to each of these dogs so that I'll get alert whenever I do not.

✓ As well, I also assign a time to each of these tasks so that I'll get an alert whenever I don't complete them.

'Dogs' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'tasks'. Also, 'get alert' needs an article 'an alert'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper word usage.