Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“helps me thinking”应为“helps me think”，“response”应为“respond”，且表达略显重复和不够简洁。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I'm quite good at memorizing things. For example, I can quickly remember important details during conversations, which helps me think clearly and respond effectively in different situations.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“seldom forgot”应为“seldom forget”，“writing my”不完整且表达不清晰。建议加强语法基础，注意时态和句子完整性，同时表达要清楚具体。

예시: Well, I seldom forget important things. Usually, when I realize something is important, I set an alarm or write a note on my phone to remind me.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“a lot of thing”应为“a lot of things”，表达不够具体且逻辑不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和更连贯的句子结构。

예시: There are many things I need to remember daily, such as my work tasks, emergencies at work, and the recipes for the dishes I cook.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，如“I'm making a note”应为“I usually make a note”，且表达略显重复。建议使用正确时态并简洁表达。

예시: Usually, I make a note or write it on my phone. Sometimes, I also ask a friend to remind me by sending a message.

× This helps me thinking clearly and response effectively in different situation.

✓ This helps me think clearly and respond effectively in different situations.

动词help后面应接动词原形而非动名词；response应为动词respond的形式；situation应为复数situations，因为表示多种情况。

× Well, I seldom forgot something important.

✓ Well, I seldom forget something important.

seldom表示频率副词，后面应使用一般现在时forget而非过去时forgot。

× Usually when I realise this thing is important I will make a noise or just writing my and make my phone to remind me.

✓ Usually when I realise this thing is important, I will make a note or just write it down and set my phone to remind me.

短语应为make a note（做笔记），而非make a noise（发出噪音）；writing应改为write；缺少write的宾语；set my phone to remind me更符合表达习惯。

× Well, it's a lot of thing to remember, and maybe it's my work and the emergency in the work, the menu of my cooking dishes and so on.

✓ Well, there are a lot of things to remember, maybe my work and emergencies at work, the menu of my cooking dishes, and so on.

a lot of后应接复数名词things；emergency应为复数emergencies；in the work应改为at work，更符合习惯用法。

× Usually I'm making a note or just writing it into my phone, or I will send a message to my friend and tell them to remind me.

✓ Usually I make a note or just write it into my phone, or I will send a message to my friend and tell them to remind me.

通常表达习惯用一般现在时make a note而非进行时am making；writing改为write以保持时态一致。