Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes such as 'to do my list' should be 'my to-do list'.

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget important details. Therefore, I usually rely on my phone to remind me of my to-do list.

제안: Your answer is understandable but lacks fluency and coherence. Use linking words and correct sentence structure. Instead of listing items abruptly, try to integrate them smoothly and be more specific.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important items such as my phone, keys, and especially my glasses quite often.

제안: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. The phrase 'I also to make sure my segment finished' is unclear. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about what 'segment' refers to. Keep sentences concise and natural.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to drink enough water to stay healthy. Additionally, I have to ensure that I complete my work tasks on time.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words and improve sentence structure. For example, 'I write notes on my phone and check my to-do list daily.'

예시: To remember important things, I always write notes on my phone and check my to-do list every day.

× I'm not very good at memorizing things because sometimes I forget about important details.

✓ I'm not very good at memorising things because sometimes I forget important details.

The verb 'memorising' should be spelled with an 's' in British English to match the context. Also, 'forget about' is less appropriate here; 'forget' without 'about' is more natural when referring to details. The correction improves naturalness and aligns with British English spelling.

× For example, I usually have to take my phone to remind me what to do my list.

✓ For example, I usually have to use my phone to remind me what to do on my list.

The original sentence has a structure error: 'take my phone to remind me what to do my list' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction uses 'use my phone' and adds the preposition 'on' before 'my list' to clarify the meaning and correct the sentence structure.

× Yes, I have forgotten something important in my life. Example my phone, my keys and more often it's my glasses.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important in my life. For example, my phone, my keys, and more often, my glasses.

The phrase 'Example my phone' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'For example,' followed by a list separated by commas. Also, 'and more often it's my glasses' is awkward; changing it to 'and more often, my glasses' improves clarity and correctness.

× In my daily life, I need to remember to drink enough water every day to stay healthy and I also to make sure my segment finished.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember to drink enough water every day to stay healthy, and I also need to make sure my segment is finished.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'need' after 'I also' and lacks the auxiliary verb 'is' before 'finished'. Adding these verbs corrects the sentence structure and makes the sentence grammatically complete.

× To remember important things I always write in my phone like notes to check my To Do List and then every day I take my notes.

✓ To remember important things, I always write notes in my phone to check my To Do List, and then every day I review my notes.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing: 'write in my phone like notes' is unclear. Changing it to 'write notes in my phone' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'take my notes' is better expressed as 'review my notes' to convey the intended action. Adding commas improves readability.