Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'person' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I can easily remember people's names and faces, which helps me recognise them quickly.

제안: Try to speak more clearly and organise your answer logically. Use linking words to explain reasons and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Be specific and concise.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes. For example, just the other day, I forgot my best friend's birthday because I was overwhelmed with work and personal matters.

제안: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Be specific about what you need to remember and why.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to have lunch and dinner on time because sometimes I get so busy with work and personal tasks that I forget to eat.

제안: Improve sentence clarity and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your methods clearly. Try to use varied vocabulary and correct grammar.

예시: Usually, I remember important things mentally, but when I feel overwhelmed with work and personal matters, I write them down on paper to keep track of my schedule and important tasks.

× Like an example, I easily remember the person names or the person face.

✓ For example, I easily remember people's names or faces.

The phrase 'Like an example' is incorrect; 'For example' is the correct expression to introduce an example. Also, 'the person names' and 'the person face' are incorrect quantifications; 'people's names' and 'faces' are appropriate plural forms here.

× a friendly sometimes I forgot, uh, important things, uh, like uh, the last day, I just remember one of my best friends birthday.

✓ Sometimes I forget important things, like the other day, I just remembered one of my best friend's birthdays.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present perfect context. 'The last day' is better expressed as 'the other day'. Also, 'remember' should be 'remembered' to indicate past action.

× So sometimes saying due to the work situation or due to the in my personal things, I forgot something.

✓ So sometimes, due to work situations or personal matters, I forget things.

The phrase 'due to the in my personal things' is incorrect; it should be 'due to personal matters'. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I need to remember in my daily life to take lunch and dinner in a proper time as uh due to the overwork in my or over working personal life, I sometimes forgot to eat so because of the overloaded with the work and person.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember to have lunch and dinner at proper times because, due to overwork and my personal life, I sometimes forget to eat because I am overloaded with work and personal matters.

The sentence has multiple preposition errors and tense inconsistency. 'In a proper time' should be 'at proper times'. 'Overwork in my or over working personal life' is awkward; better as 'overwork and my personal life'. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to maintain present tense. 'Overloaded with the work and person' should be 'overloaded with work and personal matters'.

× Usually I remember important things in my mind, but sometimes as sometimes we have overwhelmed, overloaded with the workload and the personal things.

✓ Usually, I remember important things in my mind, but sometimes, when we are overwhelmed and overloaded with workload and personal matters,

The phrase 'as sometimes we have overwhelmed' is incorrect; it should be 'when we are overwhelmed'. Also, 'the workload and the personal things' should be 'workload and personal matters' without 'the'.

× So I will note it down in the paper that what is my schedule and what important things I have to remember or sometimes I take a note.

✓ So I write it down on paper, noting my schedule and important things I have to remember; sometimes I take notes.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Note it down in the paper that what is my schedule' is incorrect; it should be 'write it down on paper, noting my schedule'. Also, 'sometimes I take a note' is better as 'sometimes I take notes'.