Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tự nhiên hơn. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời có tính logic và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially topics I enjoy, like my favorite subject, literature, and song lyrics from artists like Taylor Swift.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trúc ngữ pháp đúng. Ví dụ, thay vì 'didn't manage them from my time', bạn có thể nói 'didn't manage my time well'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I once missed a deadline for a school assignment because I was overwhelmed with multiple tasks and didn't manage my time well. Since then, I have started using reminders and calendars to stay organized.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lủng củng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

예시: I need to remember many things daily, like school assignments and housework my mom asks me to help with. Taking notes helps me concentrate and not forget my duties.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi nghiêm trọng về từ vựng và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'wash them down in a blender' không phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy giải thích cụ thể cách bạn nhớ những việc quan trọng.

예시: Normally, I write important things down or use digital apps on my phone. These methods help me organize my tasks and set reminders so I don't forget appointments or important events.

× I would say that is yes, but not all because I just memorize things which I like suggest my subject and my favorite songs.

✓ I would say that yes, but not all, because I just memorize things that I like, such as my subjects and my favorite songs.

The original sentence misuses conjunctions and relative pronouns, causing confusion. 'That is yes' is incorrect; it should be 'that yes'. 'Which I like suggest my subject' is unclear and should be 'that I like, such as my subjects'. Proper conjunctions and relative pronouns improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I like to Remember Remember lyrics from Taylor Swift songs and my favorite subject literature.

✓ I like to remember lyrics from Taylor Swift songs and my favorite subject, literature.

The repetition of 'Remember' is unnecessary and incorrect. Also, 'my favorite subject literature' needs a comma to separate the appositive. Correcting these improves sentence clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I didn't manage them from my time.

✓ I didn't manage my time well.

The phrase 'manage them from my time' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'manage my time well' to indicate poor time management. Preposition 'from' is misused here.

× I started using reminder and calendars to stay organized.

✓ I started using reminders and calendars to stay organized.

The word 'reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to match 'calendars' and indicate multiple tools used. This is a singular/plural agreement issue.

× Well, it may be take note because I easily forgot many things in my daily life such as school assignments and my housework which my mom asked me to help because overall take taking notes helped me concentrate on my duties.

✓ Well, it may be taking notes because I easily forget many things in my daily life, such as school assignments and housework that my mom asks me to help with. Overall, taking notes helps me concentrate on my duties.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'it may be take note' should be 'it may be taking notes' (verb + -ing form), 'forgot' should be 'forget' to match present tense, 'which my mom asked me to help' should be 'that my mom asks me to help with' (pronoun and preposition use), and 'take taking notes' is incorrect repetition. Correcting these improves grammar and clarity.

× Normally I wash them down in a blender or using digital apps on my phone.

✓ Normally I write them down in a notebook or use digital apps on my phone.

The phrase 'wash them down in a blender' is incorrect and nonsensical in this context. The intended meaning is likely 'write them down'. Also, 'using digital apps' should parallel 'write them down' as 'use digital apps'. Correct prepositions and verbs are necessary for clarity.

× This method helps me organize my assessments and set reminders so I don't forget the lights or appointments.

✓ This method helps me organize my assignments and set reminders so I don't forget deadlines or appointments.

'Assessments' is acceptable but 'assignments' is more common in this context. 'Forget the lights' is incorrect; likely intended 'deadlines' or 'important things'. Correcting pronouns and word choice improves meaning and clarity.