Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some unclear phrases and minor grammatical errors, such as 'Important states disability' which seems incorrect. Try to use clearer expressions and check your grammar. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I'm quite good at memorising things like phone numbers and my friends' birthdays. I find it easy to retain this kind of information, which helps me save time and makes studying more efficient.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant with a good example. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to make your answer more natural and fluent. Also, be careful with pronouns like 'her' which may confuse the listener; specify who you mean.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, especially when I feel sick or very tired. For example, I once forgot the date of my tutorial lesson, which caused me to miss it.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there are some minor grammatical errors like 'birthdays on my friends' and 'this occasions'. Try to use correct prepositions and plural forms. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I usually need to remember important days such as tutorial lessons and birthdays of my friends and myself. To avoid forgetting these occasions, I set reminders on my phone, which helps me stay organised and manage my time better.

제안: Your answer addresses the question well but contains some repetition ('usually usually') and minor grammatical errors ('importance days', 'it's help me'). Try to avoid repetition and check subject-verb agreement. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

예시: If I need to remember important days, I usually set reminders on my phone because they help me stay organised and avoid forgetting. For learning materials, I prefer to write notes in a notebook and review them several times, which helps me understand and remember the information more deeply.

× Yes, I'm quite good memorizing things like phone numbers and my friends birthday.

✓ Yes, I'm quite good at memorizing things like phone numbers and my friends' birthdays.

The phrase 'good memorizing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'good at memorizing' because 'good at' is followed by a gerund (-ing form). Also, 'friends birthday' should be plural possessive 'friends' birthdays' to indicate birthdays of multiple friends.

× Yes, I'm quite good memorizing things like phone numbers and my friends birthday.

✓ Yes, I'm quite good at memorizing things like phone numbers and my friends' birthdays.

The word 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' because it refers to multiple friends' birthdays. Also, possessive apostrophe is needed after 'friends' to show possession.

× Important states disability save me time and makes learning more efficient.

✓ Important strategies save me time and make learning more efficient.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words. 'Important states disability' is likely a mishearing or typo. The corrected sentence uses 'Important strategies' which makes sense in context. Also, 'save' and 'makes' should agree in number; both should be plural form verbs 'save' and 'make' to agree with plural subject 'strategies'.

× I usually need to remember important days such as tutorial lessons and birthdays on my friends and myself.

✓ I usually need to remember important days such as tutorial lessons and birthdays of my friends and myself.

The phrase 'birthdays on my friends and myself' is incorrect. It should be 'birthdays of my friends and myself' to correctly indicate possession and include oneself.

× To avoid forgetting this occasions, I set reminders on my phone, which helps me stay organized and be more careful about managing my time.

✓ To avoid forgetting these occasions, I set reminders on my phone, which helps me stay organized and be more careful about managing my time.

The demonstrative pronoun 'this' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun 'occasions'. The correct form is 'these occasions' to match plural.

× If I need to remember the importance days, I usually usually set reminders on my phone because it's help me to stay organized and not forget.

✓ If I need to remember important days, I usually set reminders on my phone because it helps me to stay organized and not forget.

'Importance days' is incorrect; the adjective form 'important' should be used. Also, 'it's help' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The repeated word 'usually' is removed for clarity.