Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и неестественные выражения, такие как "memories" вместо "memorize". Рекомендуется использовать правильные формы глаголов и более естественные фразы, чтобы звучать уверенно и понятно.

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I find it difficult to focus sometimes.

제안: Ответ содержит ошибки в построении предложений и нечеткие выражения, например, "I don't" в конце. Следует использовать более точные и полные предложения, а также связующие слова для логичности.

예시: Yes, I often forget important things. For instance, my mother asks me to put a pan of water on the stove, but sometimes I forget to do it.

제안: Ответ слишком длинный и немного запутанный. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и четкие предложения, а также связующие слова для улучшения связности.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks, so I write them on a list and stick it on the mirror to remind myself.

제안: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и разнообразить лексику. Используйте разные выражения и связывающие слова для более естественного звучания.

예시: To remember important things, I usually write a reminder list and stick it on the mirror. This way, every morning when I wake up, I see the list and remember my tasks for the day.

× I'm not good at memories and things.

✓ I'm not good at memorising things.

The word 'memories' is a noun meaning recollections, but the intended meaning is the verb 'memorising'. The correct phrase is 'good at memorising things'.

× it takes a lot of effort to memories something.

✓ it takes a lot of effort to memorise something.

The verb 'memories' is incorrect here; the infinitive form 'to memorise' should be used after 'to'.

× I always forget something important.

✓ I often forget something important.

The use of 'always' with 'forget' implies a habitual action but sounds unnatural here; 'often' better expresses frequent forgetting without exaggeration.

× For example, my mother can say to put the pan with water on the fire.

✓ For example, my mother can tell me to put the pan with water on the fire.

The verb 'say' is incorrectly used with an infinitive; 'tell me to' is the correct structure to indicate giving instructions.

× I can forget it and I don't.

✓ I can forget it, and sometimes I do.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete; the correction clarifies the meaning that forgetting sometimes happens.

× I think I need at least not to forget something.

✓ I think I need at least not to forget anything.

The phrase 'not to forget something' is awkward; 'not to forget anything' is more natural and correct in this context.

× I think this is necessary just to write something on the list and to stick it for example on the mirror and to see to look at it and remember.

✓ I think it is necessary to write things on a list, stick it, for example, on the mirror, and look at it to remember.

The original sentence is long and confusing; restructuring improves clarity and flow.

× As I said, to help myself to remember something important, I usually write a reminder list and stick it on the mirror and it can help me.

✓ As I said, to help myself remember something important, I usually write a reminder list and stick it on the mirror, which helps me.

The phrase 'to help myself to remember' is awkward; 'help myself remember' is correct. Also, combining sentences improves readability.