Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，且句子结构不完整。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things, but I hope to find effective methods to improve because memory is very important nowadays.

제안: 回答中时态混乱，表达不完整，且缺少连贯的逻辑。建议使用正确的时态，完整表达事件经过，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, once I forgot an important document that I needed to send to a client in five hours. It was very serious and made me feel stressed.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“things”应为“thing”，且表达略显重复。建议简洁表达并使用更准确的词汇，同时使用连接词增强句子连贯性。

예시: The most important thing I need to remember daily is my phone because it connects to my tablet and helps me accomplish tasks like shopping.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，如“right on the things”应为“writing things down”。建议使用正确表达并简洁说明方法，同时使用连接词。

예시: I often write important things down on my phone or on paper because I think writing helps me remember better, and it's very effective for me.

× I'm not good at memory things, but I looking forward to a good method to everything better because I think memory things is a very important thing nowadays I often forgot my things and it's not a good.

✓ I'm not good at memorising things, but I am looking forward to a good method to make everything better because I think memorising things is very important nowadays. I often forget my things and it's not good.

这里“memory things”应改为“memorising things”，因为“memory”是名词，不能直接修饰“things”，应使用动名词形式“memorising”。另外，“memory things is”中的“things”是复数，谓语动词应为“are”，但改为“memorising things is”更合适。还有“forgot”应为现在时“forget”，因为描述的是经常发生的事情。

× I'm not good at memory things, but I looking forward to a good method to everything better because I think memory things is a very important thing nowadays I often forgot my things and it's not a good.

✓ I'm not good at memorising things, but I am looking forward to a good method to make everything better because I think memorising things is very important nowadays. I often forget my things and it's not good.

“I looking forward”缺少助动词，应为“I am looking forward”。“forgot”是过去式，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时“forget”。

× I'm not good at memory things, but I looking forward to a good method to everything better because I think memory things is a very important thing nowadays I often forgot my things and it's not a good.

✓ I'm not good at memorising things, but I am looking forward to a good method to make everything better because I think memorising things is very important nowadays. I often forget my things and it's not good.

“good at”后面应接动名词形式，故“memory things”应改为“memorising things”。

× Yes, once a time I forgot my document, but five hours later I will send this document to an important man. But I forgot it. It's very serious and.

✓ Yes, once I forgot my document, but five hours later I was supposed to send this document to an important man. But I forgot it. It was very serious.

“once a time”应为“once”或“one time”。“will send”描述过去计划，应使用过去时“was supposed to send”。“It's very serious and.”句子不完整，应改为“It was very serious.”

× The most important things I need to remember in my daily life is my phone because my phone connected to my web pad and I need to use my phone to accomplish many things such as buying things.

✓ The most important thing I need to remember in my daily life is my phone because my phone is connected to my web pad and I need to use my phone to accomplish many things such as buying things.

“connected to”前缺少系动词“is”，应为“is connected to”。

× The most important things I need to remember in my daily life is my phone because my phone connected to my web pad and I need to use my phone to accomplish many things such as buying things.

✓ The most important thing I need to remember in my daily life is my phone because my phone is connected to my web pad and I need to use my phone to accomplish many things such as buying things.

主语“things”是复数，但谓语用的是单数“is”，应保持主谓一致，改为单数“thing”。

× I frequently write it down on my phone or write it down on the paper because I think right on the things is a good way for me to remember something I forgot and it's a very effective way for me.

✓ I frequently write it down on my phone or on paper because I think writing things down is a good way for me to remember something I forgot and it's a very effective way for me.

“right on the things”应为“writing things down”，动名词形式作主语。

× I frequently write it down on my phone or write it down on the paper because I think right on the things is a good way for me to remember something I forgot and it's a very effective way for me.

✓ I frequently write it down on my phone or on paper because I think writing things down is a good way for me to remember something I forgot and it's a very effective way for me.

“write it down on the paper”中“the paper”前的定冠词不必要，改为“on paper”更自然。