Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct prepositions and plural forms, and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I am not good at memorising things because I often forget important things. For instance, I lost my expensive watch recently.' This makes your answer more natural and clear.

예시: No, I am not good at memorising things because I often forget important things. For example, I lost my expensive watch recently.

제안: Focus on correct verb tenses and prepositions, and avoid repeating the same information. For example, say 'Yes, I lost my watch at a fair last month when I went there with my friends.' This makes your answer more coherent and grammatically correct.

예시: Yes, I lost my watch at a fair last month when I went there with my friends.

제안: Use plural forms and clearer sentence structure. For example, say 'I try to remember different types of activities daily, but mainly I focus on my schoolwork.' This improves clarity and naturalness.

예시: I try to remember different types of activities daily, but mainly I focus on my schoolwork.

제안: Use clearer vocabulary and sentence structure. For example, say 'I write important information on paper because it helps me remember things. I usually do this on weekends since I have free time then.' This makes your answer more effective and natural.

예시: I write important information on paper because it helps me remember things. I usually do this on weekends since I have free time then.

× No, I am not good in memorizing things because I forget my important thing many times.

✓ No, I am not good at memorizing things because I forget my important things many times.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items that are important.

× No, I am not good in memorizing things because I forget my important thing many times.

✓ No, I am not good at memorizing things because I forget my important things many times.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because the sentence implies forgetting multiple important items, not just one.

× Last time I lost my expensive watch.

✓ Last time, I lost my expensive watch.

A comma after 'Last time' improves clarity. The past tense 'lost' is correctly used here.

× Yes, definitely I lost my watch in fair.

✓ Yes, definitely I lost my watch at the fair.

The preposition 'at' is correct for events like 'the fair'. Also, 'fair' should have the definite article 'the'.

× It was the matter of last month when I go with my friends and I lost my expensive watch in fare.

✓ It was last month when I went with my friends and lost my expensive watch at the fair.

The verb 'go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past time reference. 'Fare' is a misspelling of 'fair' and needs the article 'the'. Also, 'the matter of last month' is unnatural; 'It was last month' is clearer.

× I like to remind different type of activity in my mind on daily basis, but my common activity is my schoolwork.

✓ I like to remember different types of activities in my mind on a daily basis, but my common activity is my schoolwork.

The verb 'remind' is incorrect here; 'remember' is appropriate. 'Different type' should be plural 'different types' and 'activity' should be plural 'activities'. The phrase 'on daily basis' needs the article 'a' to become 'on a daily basis'.

× I like to remind different type of activity in my mind on daily basis, but my common activity is my schoolwork.

✓ I like to remember different types of activities in my mind on a daily basis, but my common activity is my schoolwork.

'Type' should be plural 'types' and 'activity' should be plural 'activities' to agree with 'different' and the context.

× I like to write important information about my item on paper because it is a very good way to remind our things, and I like to write information about my thing on weekend because it is a free day for me.

✓ I like to write important information about my items on paper because it is a very good way to remember things, and I like to write information about my things on the weekend because it is a free day for me.

The preposition 'on' is correct with 'paper'. 'Remind' is incorrect here; 'remember' is appropriate. 'Item' and 'thing' should be plural 'items' and 'things' to match the context. 'On weekend' needs the definite article 'the' to become 'on the weekend'.