Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'remember' instead of 'remembering'. Try to use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples, using correct verb forms and linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially happy moments. For example, I often recall times spent with my family and friends during special occasions like anniversaries, which helps me cherish those memories.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical mistakes. Make sure to complete your sentences and use linking words to explain reasons or consequences clearly. Also, avoid redundancy and focus on clarity.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once missed a follow-up doctor appointment because I got confused with my schedule, even though I had set a notification on my phone.

제안: Your answer lacks grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use a clear topic sentence and link your ideas logically. Be specific about what you need to remember and why it is important.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important dates such as my friends' and family members' birthdays and anniversaries. Additionally, I must keep track of doctor appointments to maintain my health.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to explain your method clearly. Also, avoid repetition and ensure your answer is concise and coherent.

예시: I usually mark important dates on my phone and set reminders. This way, I get notified in advance about appointments with friends or doctors, which helps me stay organised.

× Yes, I think I'm good at remember all the happy memories such as I stay with my family and gather with my friends and I always recall all the memories in anniversary or special days.

✓ Yes, I think I'm good at remembering all the happy memories such as staying with my family and gathering with my friends, and I always recall all the memories on anniversaries or special days.

After the phrase 'good at', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'remember' should be 'remembering'. Also, verbs following 'such as' should be in the '-ing' form to indicate examples of activities. Additionally, 'in anniversary' should be 'on anniversaries' because we use 'on' with specific days and anniversaries are plural here.

× Yes, I do have forgotten something important such as I forgot to follow the date of the follow up doctor visit.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important, such as forgetting to follow the date of the follow-up doctor visit.

The phrase 'do have forgotten' is incorrect; the correct present perfect form is 'have forgotten'. Also, 'forgot' is past tense, but to maintain consistency and clarity, 'forgetting' is better after 'such as'. 'Follow up' should be hyphenated as 'follow-up' when used as an adjective.

× Although I have muddled on my schedule and I turned on the notification but I also.

✓ Although I have muddled my schedule and turned on the notification, I still missed it.

The sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'Muddled on my schedule' should be 'muddled my schedule'. The conjunctions 'although' and 'but' should not be used together. The sentence needs completion to convey the intended meaning.

× I think I need remember some days is very important for me like my friends or my family members birthday, anniversary or I do need to remember the following doctor appointment very much.

✓ I think I need to remember some days that are very important to me, like my friends' or my family members' birthdays, anniversaries, or I really need to remember the upcoming doctor appointment.

After 'need', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to remember'. Also, 'some days is' should be 'some days that are' to agree in number. Possessive forms are needed for 'friends' and 'family members'. 'Following doctor appointment' is better expressed as 'upcoming doctor appointment'.

× Actually I will mark a schedule on my phone and set an appointment notice me to I already have an appointment with my friends or doctor appointment then I.

✓ Actually, I mark my schedule on my phone and set appointment reminders to notify me when I have appointments with my friends or doctors.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Set an appointment notice me to' is incorrect; it should be 'set appointment reminders to notify me'. The sentence should be concise and clear, avoiding incomplete clauses.