Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和重复表达，且未完整回答问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并且完整回答问题。

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially English vocabulary, because I haven't practiced it much since I graduated. To improve, I usually review words regularly and use flashcards.

제안: 回答较为完整，但表达不够流畅，有语法错误和重复。建议使用更简洁的句子，注意时态和语法，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I don't think I've ever forgotten anything important because I always write important tasks in my notebook or save them on my phone. Also, I set alarms to remind me of upcoming events.

제안: 回答内容具体且相关，但开头使用了不必要的连接词“Or”，影响自然流畅。建议开头直接切入主题，句子结构更简洁。

예시: In my daily life, the hardest thing to remember is picking up my delivery packages. Since the elevator requires permission, all packages are left at the front desk, so I must remember to collect them when I get home.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误和重复，且句子较长。建议简化句子，注意时态一致，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: As I mentioned, I write important things in my notebook or save them on my phone. I also set alarms with sounds to ensure I don't miss any crucial tasks.

× it's been a long time for me to not reading the English articles and also the textbooks and also the messages.

✓ it's been a long time for me to not read the English articles and also the textbooks and also the messages.

这里不应该用动名词reading，而应该用动词不定式read，因为结构是 'for me to do something'，后面跟动词原形。

× I usually make sure that I could write all the important things done in my notebook or write it in my save it in my phone.

✓ I usually make sure that I can write all the important things down in my notebook or save them in my phone.

这里用情态动词should或can更合适，could表示过去或虚拟语气，不符合语境。并且表达要简洁，'write it in my save it in my phone'结构混乱，应分开表达。

× I usually make sure that I could write all the important things done in my notebook or write it in my save it in my phone.

✓ I usually make sure that I can write all the important things down in my notebook or save them in my phone.

动词write后面需要加介词down表示记下，且save后面直接接宾语，不需要介词。

× I usually make sure that I could write all the important things done in my notebook or write it in my save it in my phone.

✓ I usually make sure that I can write all the important things down in my notebook or save them in my phone.

'all the important things'是复数，后面代词应使用复数them，而不是it。

× I will set the alarm to remind me that there will be something important happening recently so.

✓ I will set the alarm to remind me that there will be something important happening soon.

'recently'表示最近的过去时间，不适合用在将来时态的句子中，应该用soon表示即将发生。

× So I have to remember to pick it up every day that I go home.

✓ So I have to remember to pick them up every day when I go home.

前文提到的是多个包裹(packages)，这里代词应使用复数them，而不是单数it。

× Well, like I said before, I will write it down in a notebook or to save it in my phone and also I will set alarm together to remind me with the sound and everything to make sure that I didn't I won't miss any crucial things.

✓ Well, like I said before, I will write it down in a notebook or save it in my phone, and also I will set an alarm to remind me with sound and everything to make sure that I won't miss any crucial things.

'or to save'中的to不需要，'set alarm'缺少冠词'an'，'didn't I won't'是语法错误，应去掉'didn't'，保持时态一致。

× Well, like I said before, I will write it down in a notebook or to save it in my phone and also I will set alarm together to remind me with the sound and everything to make sure that I didn't I won't miss any crucial things.

✓ Well, like I said before, I will write it down in a notebook or save it in my phone, and also I will set an alarm to remind me with sound and everything to make sure that I won't miss any crucial things.

'set alarm'前缺少冠词'an'，英语中可数名词单数前通常需要冠词。