Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I am fairly good at memorising things, but it depends on the language. For example, I find it easier to remember English paragraphs than Chinese ones, which is my native language.

제안: 回答中有重复和不完整的句子，建议使用连贯的句子表达，并补充完整的细节。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, if I don't review information several times, I tend to forget it quickly. However, if I repeat it every few days, I can remember it much better.

제안: 回答中有较多重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明需要记住的内容，并避免重复。

예시: In my daily life, especially during my studies, I need to remember the key points of my presentations. I often prepare a draft and memorise important parts to perform better.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但存在重复和语法不准确。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并丰富细节。

예시: I usually remember important things by writing them down in my planner or using digital apps on my phone. These tools help me organise my tasks and set reminders so I don't forget anything.

× Kind of sometimes it, it depends on what language the the paragraph is is if, if it's a English one, I could remember it quicker and if it's a Chinese one, my my language, maybe it's quite it's, it's kind of difficult for me to memorize.

✓ Kind of, sometimes it depends on what language the paragraph is in. If it's an English one, I can remember it quicker, and if it's a Chinese one, my language, maybe it's quite difficult for me to memorize.

句子结构混乱，重复词语过多，缺少必要的介词，导致句意不清。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，正确使用介词。

× if it's a English one, I could remember it quicker

✓ if it's an English one, I could remember it quicker

在以元音音素开头的单词前应使用不定冠词'an'，而不是'a'。这里'English'以元音音素开头，故应使用'an'。

× I could remember it quicker

✓ I can remember it quicker

此处表达一般现在时的能力，应该使用情态动词'can'，而不是过去式'could'。

× If I didn't repeat it for several times, several times I would forget it very quickly.

✓ If I didn't repeat it several times, I would forget it very quickly.

'repeat'后不需要介词'for'，'several times'本身已表示多次，重复使用多余。应去掉'for'和重复的'several times'。

× If I didn't repeat it for several times, several times I would forget it very quickly.

✓ If I don't repeat it several times, I forget it very quickly.

条件句中描述习惯性事实时，应使用一般现在时，而非过去时。

× But if I repeat it periodically, like one week or or three days, I could remember it for.

✓ But if I repeat it periodically, like every week or every three days, I can remember it.

句子末尾不完整，缺少宾语或补语。'one week or three days'应改为'每周或每三天'，并且情态动词应为'can'。

× if I need to make a presentation of of my major

✓ if I need to make a presentation on my major

动词'make a presentation'后应接介词'on'表示主题，'of'用法错误。

× sometimes I need to make make a draft and I need to memorize the words in the draft to help performance performance my presentation.

✓ sometimes I need to make a draft and memorize the words in the draft to help perform my presentation.

重复词语'performance performance'错误，且'help performance'搭配不当，应为'help perform'。

× Sometimes I remember important things by writing them down in my planner or use some digital apps in my mobile phone to and this method helps me to organize my my tasks.

✓ Sometimes I remember important things by writing them down in my planner or using some digital apps on my mobile phone, and this method helps me organize my tasks.

并列结构中动词形式应一致，'use'应改为'using'。'in my mobile phone'应改为'on my mobile phone'。重复词语'my my'应去掉。

× or use some digital apps in my mobile phone to and this method helps me to organize my my tasks.

✓ or using some digital apps on my mobile phone, and this method helps me organize my tasks.

连接词'and'前应有完整的并列结构，原句中'to and'搭配错误，应去掉'to'，并调整动词形式。