Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复和冗余。可以简洁明了地表达观点，例如直接说“我觉得我记忆力不太好，因为我有时会忘记事情。”

예시: I don't think I am good at memorising things because sometimes I forget things after a few seconds.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地叙述经历，使用正确的时态和词汇，并避免重复。

예시: Yes, once I forgot the deadline for an application, but luckily I remembered it a few days before it was due.

제안: 回答不连贯，语法错误较多。建议先明确主题句，然后用具体细节支持，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I need to remember the time to go to school and work because it is important to be punctual and not arrive late.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁表达，使用正确的句型和词汇，说明具体方法。

예시: I write important things in the notes app on my phone, and set reminders so I don't forget them.

× I not I do not think I am good at memory things because sometimes I will forget things some few seconds.

✓ I do not think I am good at memorising things because sometimes I forget things after a few seconds.

句子结构混乱，缺少助动词，且表达不清晰。应使用完整的否定形式“do not think”，并将“memory things”改为“memorising things”更符合语境。'some few seconds'应改为'a few seconds'。

× Yes, of course, one time I forgot I forgot a application time deadline and so luckily I remember that a few the app the deadline a few day.

✓ Yes, of course. One time I forgot an application deadline, but luckily I remembered it a few days before.

时态使用错误，过去事件应使用过去时态。'forgot'后重复，需删去。'a application'应为'an application'，冠词错误。'remember'应改为过去式'remembered'。'a few day'应为'a few days'。

× Umm I need to remember I go to the time of go to school and job because umm, I think it is important to remember it because I count late to arrive at.

✓ Umm, I need to remember the time to go to school and work because I think it is important; otherwise, I might be late.

介词使用错误，'go to the time of go to school'表达不正确，应改为'the time to go to school'。'job'应改为'work'更自然。'count late to arrive at'表达不通顺，应改为'might be late'。

× I will drop the the important things in my note in my note in my phone and the phone will have some tips to remind me to don't let me to forget it.

✓ I will write down important things in my notes on my phone, and the phone will have some tips to remind me so I don't forget them.

介词使用错误，'drop'用法不当，应改为'write down'。'in my note in my note in my phone'重复且不通顺，应简化为'in my notes on my phone'。'to don't let me to forget it'语法错误，应改为'so I don't forget them'。