Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you good at memorising things?
수험생
I think it depends on the type of information that I need to remember. For example, when I am fully focused on paying attention to something, I usually find it's easier for me to remember things.
시험관
Have you ever forgotten something important?
수험생
Yes I have. It happens when I am at my previous office which I forgot that I have a deadline task because my schedule was pretty packed.
시험관
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
수험생
Most of the time are my office work and my daily habit and exercise habit.
시험관
How do you remember important things?
수험생
I try to make a reminder of the important things and make A to do list of priority tasks to make me organize off the list that I have to do.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
점수: 75.0제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi Anda bisa membuatnya lebih alami dan efektif dengan menghindari pengulangan dan membuat kalimat lebih ringkas. Misalnya, Anda bisa langsung menyatakan pendapat Anda dan memberikan contoh yang lebih spesifik.
예시: I am good at memorising things when I concentrate fully. For instance, I can easily remember details from books or lectures if I pay close attention.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
점수: 65.0제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan gunakan kata penghubung agar jawaban lebih koheren.
예시: Yes, I have forgotten important tasks before. For example, at my previous job, I missed a deadline because my schedule was very busy.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
점수: 60.0제안: Jawaban Anda kurang lengkap dan kalimatnya kurang alami. Cobalah untuk memberikan kalimat topik yang jelas dan menambahkan detail yang spesifik dengan menggunakan kata penghubung.
예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my work responsibilities as well as my routines, such as exercising regularly and maintaining healthy habits.
How do you remember important things?
점수: 70.0제안: Jawaban Anda sudah mengandung ide yang baik, tetapi kalimatnya kurang jelas dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk menyusun kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan menggunakan kata penghubung agar lebih koheren.
예시: I usually set reminders and create a to-do list with priority tasks to help me stay organized and remember important things.
문법
× Yes I have. It happens when I am at my previous office which I forgot that I have a deadline task because my schedule was pretty packed.
✓ Yes, I have. It happened when I was at my previous office and I forgot that I had a deadline task because my schedule was pretty packed.
The sentence describes a past event, so the verbs should be in the past tense to maintain consistency. 'Happens' should be 'happened', 'am' should be 'was', and 'have' should be 'had'. This ensures correct past tense usage.
× Most of the time are my office work and my daily habit and exercise habit.
✓ Most of the time, it is my office work and my daily habits and exercise habits.
The subject 'Most of the time' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'habit' should be plural 'habits' to match the plural context of multiple habits.
× I try to make a reminder of the important things and make A to do list of priority tasks to make me organize off the list that I have to do.
✓ I try to make a reminder of the important things and make a to-do list of priority tasks to help me organize the list that I have to do.
The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. 'To do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. The phrase 'make me organize off the list' is incorrect; it should be 'help me organize the list'. Also, 'organize off' is not correct preposition usage.
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