Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'memorizing things' and clarify the last sentence for better coherence. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, which I attribute partly to my healthy diet. For instance, I regularly eat fruits, vegetables, and eggs, which are known to boost brain function. This ability helps me meet deadlines and remember important tasks in both my professional and personal life.

제안: Your response addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer expressions and linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'judge essential information' and be more specific.

예시: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I always carry a notepad to record essential information. Additionally, I use assistive technologies on my mobile devices, such as reminders, which help me stay on schedule. This approach has improved my personal and professional life by ensuring I meet deadlines consistently.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but it could be more natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the types of activities you remember.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my entire schedule to stay organised and avoid missing important activities. To help with this, I use either my notepad or my phone, which provides useful features like reminders and notifications.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for better coherence. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'maps out task' and be more precise about how the technology helps you.

예시: I remember important things by saving them on my notepad or mobile device. I prefer using my mobile device because it offers assistive technologies like notifications and reminders that help me organise my tasks effectively.

× I eat a lot of fruits, vegetables and eggs which are brain boosting meals.

✓ I eat a lot of fruit, vegetables and eggs which are brain-boosting meals.

In English, 'fruit' is often used as an uncountable noun when referring to food in general, so 'a lot of fruit' is correct rather than 'a lot of fruits'. Also, 'brain boosting' should be hyphenated as 'brain-boosting' because it is a compound adjective describing 'meals'.

× This ability helps me in my professional and personal life as I meet deadlines and don't forget significant.

✓ This ability helps me in my professional and personal life as I meet deadlines and don't forget significant things.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'don't forget significant' which is incomplete. The word 'significant' is an adjective and needs a noun to complete the meaning, such as 'things' or 'matters'. Adding 'things' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× I carry my notepad to judge essential information.

✓ I carry my notepad to jot down essential information.

The verb 'judge' is incorrect in this context. The correct verb is 'jot down', which means to write something quickly. Also, 'to judge essential information' does not make sense here.

× Moreover, I use the assistive technologies from my mobile devices which enables me remind important task.

✓ Moreover, I use the assistive technologies from my mobile devices which enable me to remember important tasks.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'technologies' (plural), so the verb should be 'enable' (plural), not 'enables'. Also, 'remind' should be 'to remember' to fit the meaning. 'Important task' should be plural 'important tasks' to match the context.

× This has helped me to grow in my personal and professional because I keep to time I don't miss deadlines.

✓ This has helped me to grow in my personal and professional life because I keep to time and don't miss deadlines.

The phrase 'in my personal and professional' is incomplete; it should be 'in my personal and professional life'. Also, the sentence is missing a conjunction 'and' between 'keep to time' and 'I don't miss deadlines' to connect the two clauses properly.

× In my daily life, I need to remember all my schedule so as to stay organized and ensure I don't miss out on important activity.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember all my schedules so as to stay organized and ensure I don't miss out on important activities.

The word 'schedule' should be plural 'schedules' because 'all my' implies multiple items. Similarly, 'important activity' should be plural 'important activities' to match the plural context.

× Preferably I use my mobile device because it offers assistive technology such as notifications and reminders that maps out task.

✓ Preferably, I use my mobile device because it offers assistive technology such as notifications and reminders that map out tasks.

The verb 'maps' should be plural 'map' to agree with the plural subject 'notifications and reminders'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the plural subject. A comma after 'Preferably' improves sentence clarity.