Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ như "you know" quá nhiều và nên cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

예시: I think my ability to memorise depends on the situation. For example, I tend to remember events that have strong emotional impacts on me because they leave a lasting impression.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt cho chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi như "did forgot" mà nên là "did forget". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên được chia thành các câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên kết để dễ hiểu hơn.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, one night my dad asked me to lock the door, but I forgot and got scolded because of that.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "I would forgot" thay vì "I would forget". Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và tránh lặp từ như "you know". Hãy cụ thể hơn về cách bạn ghi chú và quản lý công việc hàng ngày.

예시: I need to remember all my daily tasks, especially my homework. To help with this, I usually write a to-do list in a note app so I don't forget anything important.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "they have a mode" nên là "it has a feature". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Hãy giải thích cụ thể hơn về cách ứng dụng giúp bạn nhớ việc quan trọng.

예시: As I mentioned, I use a note app that has a reminder feature. This tool helps me organize my tasks and ensures I don't forget important things.

× I would, you know, really remember each details of things when it comes to emotionals, for example, when the occasions affect my feelings, I would definitely, you know, remember it every in every.

✓ I would, you know, really remember each detail of things when it comes to emotions, for example, when occasions affect my feelings, I would definitely, you know, remember it every time.

The word 'details' should be singular 'detail' after 'each' because 'each' is followed by a singular noun. 'Emotionals' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'emotions'. 'The occasions' should be 'occasions' without 'the' because it refers to occasions in general. 'Every in every' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'every time'.

× Definitely, I think everyone does so once it once in a time my dad told me to lock the door at night but somehow I did forgot that task and I got yelled at really hard.

✓ Definitely, I think everyone does, so once upon a time my dad told me to lock the door at night but somehow I forgot that task and I got yelled at really hard.

The phrase 'once it once in a time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'once upon a time'. 'Did forgot' is incorrect; after 'did' the base form 'forget' should be used, so 'did forget' or simply 'forgot'.

× I would definitely say all the tasks. I always use note to write down all the as A to do list everything I have to do in a day in case I would forgot it because I you know, I have a lot of homework.

✓ I would definitely say all the tasks. I always use notes to write down everything as a to-do list of everything I have to do in a day in case I forget it because, you know, I have a lot of homework.

'Note' should be plural 'notes' because it refers to multiple notes or a note-taking app. 'As A to do list' should be 'as a to-do list' with correct article and hyphenation. 'Would forgot' is incorrect; after 'would' the base form 'forget' should be used.

× As I have mentioned I would use Note app and they have a mode to remind you what do you need to do and this is really useful for your life as is a tools to help you control all your things and not to forget anything.

✓ As I have mentioned, I would use the Note app and it has a mode to remind you what you need to do, and this is really useful for your life as it is a tool to help you control all your things and not forget anything.

'Note app' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific app. 'They have a mode' is incorrect because 'Note app' is singular; it should be 'it has a mode'. 'What do you need to do' should be 'what you need to do' in indirect speech. 'As is a tools' should be 'as it is a tool' to match singular subject and verb. 'Not to forget' should be 'not forget' for correct infinitive usage.