Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达不够清晰，存在重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连贯的句子表达原因。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often get distracted. However, I believe improving my memory would help me focus better on my studies.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，且细节不够具体，建议使用正确时态并详细描述忘记的重要物品及其影响。

예시: Yes, I once forgot to bring my knife to school, which was inconvenient because I had to ask my parents to bring it to me.

제안: 回答结构混乱，表达不清晰，建议直接回答并说明具体需要记住的事项及其重要性。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks like assignments and their deadlines to make sure I submit them on time.

제안: 回答不连贯且含糊，建议明确说明记忆方法并举例说明如何使用工具帮助记忆。

예시: I usually use apps to set reminders for important tasks, such as assignment deadlines, to help me remember them.

× I think because I'm I'm usually, I'm off quite often to forget some things.

✓ I think because I'm usually off quite often, I forget some things.

这里的错误是时态使用不当，应该使用一般现在时来表达习惯性动作。原句中“I'm I'm usually, I'm off quite often to forget”结构混乱，且“to forget”不符合语境，应改为“I forget”。

× They're not very not important.

✓ They're not very important.

这里使用了双重否定“not very not important”，造成语义混乱。应去掉多余的“not”，保持句子简洁明了。

× But however I think memorising maybe a diploma will help me to focus on one thing because I can concentrate to the better in one sense.

✓ However, I think memorising, maybe for a diploma, will help me to focus on one thing because I can concentrate better in one sense.

“But however”是重复连接词，应只用一个。句子结构混乱，需调整词序和添加适当介词，使表达更清晰。

× Andy, I have forgot something that is important.

✓ Andy, I have forgotten something that is important.

“have forgot”是错误的过去分词形式，正确的过去分词是“forgotten”，用于现在完成时。

× For example, I remember left knife at home and then I need to ask my parents to bring it back to me.

✓ For example, I remember leaving my knife at home and then I needed to ask my parents to bring it back to me.

“remember left”时态错误，应使用动名词“leaving”表示记得做过某事。后半句“need”应改为过去时“needed”，与前文时态一致。

× I need to setting a timing for me not to over the bill day and I need to submit that time.

✓ I need to set a time for myself not to miss the deadline and I need to submit it on time.

“setting”应为动词原形“set”，且“a timing”不自然，应为“a time”。“over the bill day”表达错误，应为“miss the deadline”。“submit that time”缺少介词，应为“submit it on time”。

× Maybe something minus something that you think is very important.

✓ Maybe something like something that you think is very important.

“minus”用法错误，表达“类似”的意思应使用“like”。

× Maybe the apps I mentioned like assignment, the deadline of assignment.

✓ Maybe the apps I mentioned, like those for assignments and their deadlines.

原句中“assignment”单数使用不当，且表达不完整，需用复数形式“assignments”并明确“their deadlines”，使句子更通顺。