Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 중복되고 문법적으로 부자연스러운 부분이 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하며, 관심 있는 것에 대해 기억력이 좋다는 점을 자연스럽게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: It depends on the situation. If I am interested in something, I can remember it well. However, if I am not interested, I tend to forget it easily.

제안: 중복된 단어 사용과 문장 구조가 부자연스럽습니다. 중요한 것을 잊지 않기 위해 메모를 한다는 점을 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I rarely forget important things because I write them down in my notes or smartphone. This helps me remember them easily.

제안: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 많습니다. 가족과 친구가 중요하다는 점을 명확히 하고, 관계의 중요성을 자연스럽게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: In daily life, I need to remember my family and friends because maintaining good relationships is very important. We can support each other when needed.

제안: 문장이 중단되고 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 중요한 것을 메모하는 방법을 명확하고 자연스럽게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I write important things down in my notes or smartphone because it is simple and convenient. This way, I can easily check them whenever I need.

× If I am not interested in something, I don't.

✓ If I am not interested in something, I don't remember it.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks the verb 'remember' which is necessary to complete the meaning. The present tense is appropriate here to describe a habitual action.

× but something is very interested in me.

✓ but something is very interesting to me.

The adjective 'interested' describes a feeling experienced by a person, while 'interesting' describes something that causes interest. Here, 'something' should be described as 'interesting' to correctly convey the meaning.

× I remember the world.

✓ I remember the words.

The word 'world' is likely a typo or mishearing of 'words' which fits the context of memorising things. 'Words' is plural and appropriate here.

× because I like it down in the notes or smartphones.

✓ because I write it down in notes or on smartphones.

The phrase 'like it down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write it down'. Also, 'in the notes' should be 'in notes' and 'smartphones' should be preceded by 'on' to indicate the device.

× So I I I can know about that.

✓ So I can remember it.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'I can know about that' is not a natural expression. 'I can remember it' is clearer and fits the context.

× We have to remember our precious members such as family and friends because in a relationship is very important to live our life.

✓ We have to remember our precious members such as family and friends because relationships are very important to live our lives.

'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to match the general statement. Also, 'our life' should be plural 'our lives' to agree with plural subjects.

× We can help and other each other's.

✓ We can help each other.

The phrase 'help and other each other's' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'help each other' without 'and' or possessive pronouns.

× I can look at them very comfortable.

✓ I can look at them very comfortably.

'Comfortable' is an adjective, but here an adverb is needed to modify the verb 'look'. The correct adverb form is 'comfortably'.