Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“relate on notes”应为“rely on notes”。建议注意动词搭配和时态的正确使用，同时避免拼写错误。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. I often forget where I put my keys or phone, and I struggle to remember names and faces, so I usually rely on notes or reminders to keep track of things.

제안: 回答中存在时态错误，如“don't usually forgot”应为“don't usually forget”。建议注意动词时态的一致性，并且可以使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Well, no, I don't usually forget important things because I write everything down in my planner, which helps me remember what I need to do.

제안: 回答中“work stack tags”表达不清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇如“work tasks”。同时，句子结构可以更简洁，避免冗长。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember work tasks such as deadlines and meetings. I also check my emails and messages to make sure I don't miss anything important.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，如“plan my week ahead in using Planner app”应简化为“plan my week ahead using a planner app”。建议注意句子结构的流畅和准确。

예시: I usually plan my week ahead using a planner app on my phone. It's very convenient because it can set reminders, and no matter where I am, I can check my schedule on my phone.

× I often forget where I put my kids or phone and I struggle to remember names and faces so I usually relate on notes or reminder to keep track of things.

✓ I often forget where I put my keys or phone and I struggle to remember names and faces so I usually rely on notes or reminders to keep track of things.

这里的“kids”应为“keys”，因为语境中是指钥匙，而不是孩子。此外，“reminder”应为复数形式“reminders”，因为通常会有多个提醒。

× Well, no, I don't usually forgot important things 'cause I write everything down on planner so it can help me remember what I need to do.

✓ Well, no, I don't usually forget important things 'cause I write everything down on my planner so it can help me remember what I need to do.

“don't usually forgot”中“forgot”是过去式，应该用动词原形“forget”与助动词“do”搭配。

× Well in my daily life I need to remember some work stack tags like deadline or meeting and sometimes I need to check my e-mail and message to make sure I don't miss something important.

✓ Well, in my daily life I need to remember some work stack tags like deadlines or meetings and sometimes I need to check my e-mails and messages to make sure I don't miss something important.

“deadline”与“meeting”应使用复数形式“deadlines”和“meetings”，因为指多个事项。同时，“e-mail”和“message”也应为复数形式。

× I usually plan my week ahead in using Planner app on my phone. It is really convenient, it can set me a reminder and no matter where I am, I can just put on my phone and check my schedule.

✓ I usually plan my week ahead using the Planner app on my phone. It is really convenient; it can set me a reminder and no matter where I am, I can just pull out my phone and check my schedule.

“plan my week ahead in using”中“in”多余，应去掉。应用“using”直接连接动词。并且“Planner app”前应加定冠词“the”。“put on my phone”表达不准确，改为“pull out my phone”更符合语境。