Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn về trải nghiệm của mình. Hãy chú ý đến cách sử dụng thì và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I used to be good at memorizing things, but after recovering from COVID-19, I have noticed that my memory has become worse. For example, I sometimes forget appointments or important dates, which never happened before.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể và chính xác hơn về sự việc đã quên để câu trả lời sinh động và thuyết phục.

예시: Yes, I once forgot an important competition that was scheduled in the morning. I mistakenly thought it would be in the evening, so I woke up late and missed it. My mother was very upset with me because of that.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do tại sao bạn cần nhớ những điều đó. Đồng thời, chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: As a student, I need to remember my daily schedule and meal times, especially breakfast. Many students in Vietnam skip breakfast because they don't have enough time to prepare in the morning, which can affect their concentration during classes.

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích rõ hơn về cách bạn sử dụng ghi chú hoặc danh sách việc cần làm để nhớ các việc quan trọng.

예시: I usually remember important things by making notes or creating a to-do list. I prefer using my phone because it is convenient and easy to carry in my pocket, so I can check my reminders anytime.

× I seems my memorizing is worse.

✓ I seem to have worse memory.

The verb 'seems' is incorrectly used with the subject 'I'. The correct form is 'I seem'. Also, 'my memorizing is worse' is awkward; 'I seem to have worse memory' is clearer.

× I remember that I have forgotten the important things is my competition and is it in the morning.

✓ I remember that I forgot something important: my competition was in the morning.

The sentence mixes present perfect 'have forgotten' with past event. Use simple past 'forgot' for a completed past action. Also, sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing.

× I thought it it I thought it will begins at the evening and then I just wake up very late.

✓ I thought it would begin in the evening, but I woke up very late.

When reporting past thoughts about the future, use 'would' instead of 'will'. Also, 'begins' should be base form 'begin' after 'would'. 'At the evening' should be 'in the evening'. 'Wake up' should be past tense 'woke up'.

× And my mom also yelled me a lot about that time.

✓ And my mom also yelled at me a lot at that time.

'Yell' requires the preposition 'at' before the object. So 'yelled me' is incorrect; it should be 'yelled at me'.

× the things that I need to remember in my daily life is about my schedule and for my meals especially.

✓ The things that I need to remember in my daily life are my schedule and especially my meals.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, sentence structure improved for clarity.

× I see student in Vietnam also skip their breakfast because they don't have enough time to prepare for the morning in the morning.

✓ I see students in Vietnam also skip their breakfast because they don't have enough time to prepare in the morning.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'they'. Also, 'prepare for the morning in the morning' is redundant; 'prepare in the morning' is sufficient.

× For me the best way to remember important things is note or you can have A to do list.

✓ For me, the best way to remember important things is a note or you can have a to-do list.

The noun 'note' needs an article 'a'. Also, 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with lowercase 'a' and hyphens.

× You cannot own a paper note or on the phone.

✓ You can have a paper note or use your phone.

'Cannot own' is incorrect here; 'can have' or 'can use' is appropriate. Also, 'on the phone' is unclear; better to say 'use your phone'.

× I prefer not on the phone because it is convenient and easy to carry because the phone is small and you can put it in the pocket.

✓ I prefer notes on the phone because it is convenient and easy to carry since the phone is small and you can put it in your pocket.

The original sentence contradicts itself by saying 'I prefer not on the phone' but then giving reasons why it is convenient. Corrected to express preference for notes on the phone. Also, 'in the pocket' should be 'in your pocket'.