Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“I pretty good”应为“I am pretty good”，以及“memory things”应为“memorising things”。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，避免语法错误，同时回答应更简洁自然。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember phone numbers and faces without making mistakes. I also enjoy playing memory games to keep my mind sharp.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“before I forgot my best friend birthday”应为“before, I forgot my best friend's birthday”。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which made me feel terrible. Since we are very close, I promised to apologize and make it up to them.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，如“asset deadline”可能是“assignment deadline”，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达观点。

예시: As a student, I need to remember important things like assignment deadlines and my daily tasks. Most importantly, I believe it is my responsibility to learn and understand the knowledge taught in class.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构略显重复和不够自然。建议使用更流畅的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I usually rely on technology to remember important things. For example, I use apps and calendars to set reminders, which help me keep track of my tasks and ensure I don't forget anything.

× I pretty good at memory things, I can easily remember the phone call number and face without any error and I also enjoy the memory game to remind me my mind clear.

✓ I am pretty good at memorising things. I can easily remember phone numbers and faces without any errors, and I also enjoy memory games to keep my mind clear.

句子中缺少系动词“am”，导致形容词“pretty good”无法正确修饰主语。'memory things'应改为动名词形式'memorising things'，'phone call number'应为复数形式'phone numbers'，'face'应为复数'faces'，'memory game'应为复数形式'memory games'，'to remind me my mind clear'表达不当，改为'to keep my mind clear'更自然。

× Yes, I forgot something very important before I forgot my best friend birthday and I feel absolutely terrible.

✓ Yes, I forgot something very important before. I forgot my best friend's birthday and I felt absolutely terrible.

句子中'the best friend birthday'缺少所有格，应为'best friend's birthday'。'feel'应使用过去时态'felt'，因为描述的是过去的感受。

× We were so close and I promised I will apologize and make it up to them.

✓ We were so close and I promised I would apologize and make it up to them.

在表达过去的承诺时，后半句应使用过去将来时态'would'，而不是现在将来时态'will'。

× As I am a student, I need to remember the asset deadline very clear and my work task.

✓ As I am a student, I need to remember the assignment deadlines very clearly and my work tasks.

'asset deadline'应为'assignment deadlines'，且应为复数形式。'very clear'修饰动词'remember'不合适，应使用副词'very clearly'。'work task'应为复数形式'work tasks'。

× The most important thing is the knowledge on the class is our responsibility and our duty to learn well.

✓ The most important thing is that the knowledge in class is our responsibility and our duty to learn well.

'knowledge on the class'应改为'knowledge in class'，介词使用错误。句子缺少连接词'that'，使句子结构更完整。

× For me, I will rely on technology.

✓ For me, I rely on technology.

此句中时态应与上下文保持一致，使用一般现在时'rely'更合适。

× I will use the app and make a calendar to remind me when to do what things and to make sure I will not forget.

✓ I will use an app and make a calendar to remind me when to do what and to make sure I do not forget.

'the app'应改为不定冠词'an app'，因为不是特指某个应用。'what things'表达冗余，简化为'what'即可。'will not forget'改为一般现在时'do not forget'更自然。