Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details. Also, avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things, but I find that repeating information several times helps me remember better. For example, when I study, I read the material multiple times to improve my memory.

제안: Your answer is relevant but quite long and contains some grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Be concise and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I once forgot a very important doctor's appointment that I had booked two months in advance due to the long waiting list. This made me disappointed and delayed my treatment.

제안: Your answer is clear but a bit lengthy and has some grammatical errors. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and try to be more concise. Also, pay attention to singular/plural agreement and sentence structure.

예시: The most important thing I need to remember daily is my house key. Sometimes I leave it in the car or inside the house when other family members are still there, which causes me to wait for them when I return.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Use a clear topic sentence and link your ideas smoothly. Avoid informal expressions like "gonna" in formal speaking.

예시: I use my phone's calendar to set reminders for important tasks. This method helps me remember things easily and makes my life more organised.

× Not as much as I want to memorize things, but sometimes if I repeat them very often I can memorize properly.

✓ Not as much as I want to memorise things, but sometimes if I repeat them very often I can memorise properly.

The verb 'memorize' should be in British English spelling as 'memorise' to be consistent with the rest of the transcript and standard UK English usage.

× I try a lot to read and to help my memory to be healthy and.

✓ I try a lot to read and to help my memory stay healthy.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured. 'Help my memory to be healthy and' is incorrect; it should be 'help my memory stay healthy' to complete the thought properly and maintain grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I have forgot something very important which was my appointment to the doctor which I booked in two months advance because of the long queue and on the day I completely forgot and that made me so disappointed with myself and as well delayed my my treatment to the doctor.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something very important which was my appointment to the doctor which I booked two months in advance because of the long queue, and on the day I completely forgot, which made me very disappointed with myself and also delayed my treatment with the doctor.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense; after 'have' the past participle 'forgotten' should be used. Also, 'in two months advance' should be 'two months in advance'. The sentence is long and needs commas for clarity. 'Delayed my my treatment to the doctor' is corrected to 'delayed my treatment with the doctor' for natural phrasing.

× The most important thing which I need to remember in my daily life is my house key.

✓ The most important thing which I need to remember in my daily life is my house keys.

Typically, people have more than one house key, so the plural 'keys' is more appropriate here to reflect common usage.

× I always forget them on the car or maybe inside the house if other members of family are still in there and I leave 1st and that makes me struggle when I come back because often I need to wait for them to come from work.

✓ I always forget them in the car or maybe inside the house if other family members are still there and I leave first, which makes me struggle when I come back because I often need to wait for them to come home from work.

The preposition 'on the car' is incorrect; it should be 'in the car'. 'Members of family' should be 'family members'. 'Leave 1st' should be 'leave first'. 'Wait for them to come from work' is better as 'wait for them to come home from work' for clarity.

× I try to install in my phone calendar and to put a reminder, otherwise it's gonna be very difficult for me to remind something very important which I have to do.

✓ I try to put it in my phone calendar and set a reminder; otherwise, it's going to be very difficult for me to remember something very important that I have to do.

The phrase 'install in my phone calendar' is incorrect; 'put it in my phone calendar' is correct. Also, 'remind something' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'remember something'. 'Gonna' is informal and should be 'going to' in formal speech.

× And putting in my calendar help me a lot and make my life easier.

✓ And putting it in my calendar helps me a lot and makes my life easier.

The subject 'putting' is singular, so the verbs should be 'helps' and 'makes' to agree in number. Also, 'putting in my calendar' needs the pronoun 'it' to specify what is being put in the calendar.