Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“overheard many tasks”应为“have many tasks”。建议使用更准确的表达，并简洁明了地回答问题。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising because I have many tasks to handle, which makes it hard for me to remember details like numbers or information.

제안: 回答较为完整，但语法错误影响表达，如“it's hardly ever happens”应为“it hardly ever happens”。建议注意语法准确性，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: No, it hardly ever happens because I usually take notes or make lists to remember important things, and this method is very useful for me.

제안: 回答结构混乱，句子不完整且重复。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: I need to remember my timetable because I am a student. It's important to keep track of my lessons so that I can prepare well and pass my exams.

제안: 回答表达不够自然，存在语法错误，如“look it on my phone”应为“look at it on my phone”。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词。

예시: I usually take notes to remember important tasks, and then I check them on my phone, which helps me stay organized.

× No, I don't think I'm very good at memorizing because I overheard many tasks to handle which make it difficult for me to remember details like numbers or informations.

✓ No, I don't think I'm very good at memorizing because I have many tasks to handle which make it difficult for me to remember details like numbers or information.

“informations”是不可数名词，不能加复数形式，应改为“information”。另外，“overheard”意思是“无意中听到”，应改为“have”表示拥有任务。

× No, it's hardly ever happens because I usually take some notes or make a list to remember what things I really need to do and it is useful for me.

✓ No, it hardly ever happens because I usually take some notes or make a list to remember the things I really need to do and it is useful for me.

“it's hardly ever happens”中“it's”和“happens”重复使用了动词，应去掉“'s”，改为“it hardly ever happens”。

× And I think it must because a timetable, because I'm a student, I need to remember the lessons I need to take.

✓ And I think it must be a timetable, because I'm a student, I need to remember the lessons I need to take.

句子缺少动词“be”，应补充为“must be a timetable”，使句子结构完整。

× And then I usually look it on my phone.

✓ And then I usually look at it on my phone.

动词“look”后面需要介词“at”来引出宾语，缺少“at”导致介词使用错误。