Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

예시: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget important items like my wallet, keys, or homework.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，逻辑更连贯。

예시: Yes, I once forgot to submit an important assignment. Although I finished it weeks earlier, I put it aside and completely forgot about it before the deadline, which resulted in a low mark.

제안: 回答中句子结构不够清晰，表达有些混乱。建议简化句子，使用连贯的表达方式。

예시: As a student, I need to remember my class schedule, including the time and location of each class. Therefore, I always check my timetable before leaving home.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达重复问题，如“reminder reminder”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复。

예시: I usually use tools like taking notes or writing reminders on my phone. This helps me remember important things, and I can also set alarms as additional reminders.

× I always forget some important items such as wallet or key or my homework.

✓ I always forget some important items such as my wallet, keys, or my homework.

这里“wallet”和“key”是可数名词，表示多个物品时应使用复数形式“wallets”和“keys”，但通常我们说“my wallet”和“my keys”，所以应加上所有格“my”，并且“key”应使用复数形式“keys”。

× So I'm not good at memory things.

✓ So I'm not good at memorising things.

“memory things”表达不正确，应该使用动名词形式“memorising”来表示“记忆”的动作。

× I forgot my assignment for an important majors.

✓ I forgot my assignment for an important major.

“majors”是复数形式，但这里应指单一专业，故应使用单数“major”。

× I finished it for weeks earlier so I just put it away.

✓ I finished it weeks earlier so I just put it away.

“for weeks earlier”表达不正确，表示过去完成的时间应直接用“weeks earlier”，不需要“for”。

× So my mark is very low due to I forget.

✓ So my mark was very low because I forgot.

“due to”后面应接名词或名词短语，不能直接接句子，且时态应与上下文一致，故改为“because I forgot”，并将时态改为过去时。

× what's where is the classroom, what is the time for this class?

✓ where the classroom is, and what time this class is.

句子结构混乱，正确表达应为“where the classroom is”和“what time this class is”，去掉多余的“what's”和“for”。

× It is the best way for me to remember some important.

✓ It is the best way for me to remember some important things.

“some important”后缺少名词，应补充“things”来完整表达。

× They just act a row of reminder reminder and also I can set a alarm to remind me.

✓ They just act as a row of reminders, and also I can set an alarm to remind me.

“act a row of reminder reminder”表达不正确，应为“act as a row of reminders”；“a alarm”前应使用“an”因为“alarm”以元音音素开头。