Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you good at memorising things?
수험생
Yes, I'm pretty good at memorizing things. I always can remember number and date. I always remember someone name and face. I always play the memory game.
시험관
Have you ever forgotten something important?
수험생
No, I often write down important things because this is can help me remember that, for example, the study title.
시험관
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
수험생
I think I should remember some healthy things, for example when I go to eat medicine and when I go to. Walking my dog.
시험관
How do you remember important things?
수험생
I always write down on the paper because it's easy to see that and notice me and I always put it on the door.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且句子结构较为简单，缺少连贯的连接词。建议加强语法准确性，使用连接词使回答更流畅，并丰富细节。
예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I often play memory games. For example, I can easily remember numbers, dates, names, and faces, which helps me in daily life.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不够自然，且内容较为简单。建议改进语法，使用更自然的表达，并增加细节说明。
예시: I rarely forget important things because I usually write them down. For instance, I note down study titles to make sure I don't forget them.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议理清思路，使用完整句子，并具体说明需要记住的事项。
예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to take my medicine on time and to walk my dog regularly to keep both of us healthy.
How do you remember important things?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答表达不够流畅，语法有误，缺少连接词。建议使用更自然的表达方式，增加连接词使句子连贯。
예시: I usually write important things on paper because it's easy to see. Then, I put the notes on the door so I can notice them every day.
문법
× I always can remember number and date.
✓ I can always remember numbers and dates.
这里的“number”和“date”应该使用复数形式，因为通常我们记住的是多个数字和日期。
× I always remember someone name and face.
✓ I always remember someone's name and face.
“someone”后面所有格应为“someone's”，表示某人的名字和脸。
× I always can remember number and date.
✓ I can always remember numbers and dates.
情态动词“can”应放在主语之后，副词“always”通常放在情态动词之后。
× I always play the memory game.
✓ I always play memory games.
“memory game”应使用复数形式，表示多种记忆游戏。
× this is can help me remember that, for example, the study title.
✓ this can help me remember that, for example, the study title.
“is can”结构错误，情态动词“can”不需要助动词“is”。
× I think I should remember some healthy things, for example when I go to eat medicine and when I go to. Walking my dog.
✓ I think I should remember some healthy things, for example when I take medicine and when I walk my dog.
“eat medicine”应改为“take medicine”，且“Walking my dog”应改为“walk my dog”，保持动词形式一致。
× I always write down on the paper because it's easy to see that and notice me and I always put it on the door.
✓ I always write it down on paper because it's easy to see and reminds me, and I always put it on the door.
“write down on the paper”应为“write it down on paper”，去掉定冠词“the”，并且“notice me”应改为“reminds me”更符合语境。
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