Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, I have a good memory, especially when it comes to remembering people's names and faces. For instance, I can easily recall the names of classmates I met only once.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Make sure to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the situation.

예시: Yes, I once forgot to submit an important assignment when I was in grade 2, which directly affected my grades. This experience was quite disappointing and taught me to be more responsible.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain how you remember things in daily life with specific examples and linking words.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember deadlines for my tasks. To manage this, I usually set reminders on my phone, which helps me complete tasks on time and avoid forgetting important duties.

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Provide a topic sentence and support it with specific examples using linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: To remember important things, I usually set alarms on my smartphone. For example, if I am busy with other work, the alarm reminds me to complete my tasks, which is very effective for me.

× Yes, I have a good memories where I can easily memorize person names and face.

✓ Yes, I have good memories where I can easily memorize people's names and faces.

The word 'memories' is plural, so the article 'a' should be removed. Also, 'person names and face' should be pluralized to 'people's names and faces' to correctly refer to multiple names and faces.

× Yes, I forgot to submit my important assignment when I was in grade 2 verse with directly affected in my grades which was quite disappointing for me.

✓ Yes, I forgot to submit my important assignment when I was in grade 2, which directly affected my grades and was quite disappointing for me.

The phrase 'verse with directly affected in my grades' is incorrect and unclear. It should be rephrased to 'which directly affected my grades' to correctly express the cause and effect in past tense.

× I usually set deadline to complete my tasks where I remember my text in my daily lives.

✓ I usually set deadlines to complete my tasks where I remember my texts in my daily life.

'Deadline' should be plural 'deadlines' to match 'tasks'. 'Text' should be plural 'texts' if referring to multiple items. 'Daily lives' should be singular 'daily life' as it refers to the individual's routine.

× However, it is effective way to complete the task within a short period of time and easy to get remember our tax.

✓ However, it is an effective way to complete tasks within a short period of time and easy to remember our tasks.

The sentence lacks the article 'an' before 'effective way'. 'Get remember' is incorrect; it should be 'remember'. 'Tax' is likely a typo for 'task'.

× To be honest, I usually set alarm in my smart phones where I can remember my important things.

✓ To be honest, I usually set alarms on my smartphones so I can remember my important things.

'Alarm' should be plural 'alarms' to match the context. 'Smart phones' should be one word 'smartphones'. 'Where' is incorrectly used; 'so' better connects the purpose.

× For example, if I was working in another work, the alarm reflecting me to do my text, who is gonna be quite effective for me?

✓ For example, if I am working on another task, the alarm reminds me to do my work, which is quite effective for me.

'If I was' should be 'if I am' to indicate a conditional present/future situation. 'In another work' should be 'on another task'. 'Reflecting me' is incorrect; 'reminds me' is correct. 'Who is gonna be' should be 'which is' to refer to the alarm's effectiveness.