Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I tend to remember experiences vividly, especially when I am in a quiet environment that helps me focus better.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer linking. Avoid informal phrases like 'freaked out' and try to explain your reasons more clearly.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things, particularly when I feel stressed or distracted, especially if I am in a noisy environment that affects my concentration.

제안: Your answer is detailed and relevant, but the structure could be improved by using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid minor grammatical errors and make your sentences more concise.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember several things. For instance, I have to arrive at the office on time, and I also have to complete tasks within specific deadlines. Therefore, I keep a schedule and write down important reminders.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using plural forms correctly and adding linking words to enhance coherence. Also, try to vary your vocabulary slightly.

예시: I usually set reminders on my phone to help me remember important tasks. This way, I can stay organised and complete my duties more efficiently.

× I do believe I'm quite good at memorizing things because when I see or feel something, I do remember it for a long period of time because I have a good focused energy when I'm in a quiet place.

✓ I do believe I'm quite good at memorising things because when I see or feel something, I remember it for a long period of time because I have good focused energy when I'm in a quiet place.

The verb 'memorizing' should be in British English spelling as 'memorising' to match the context. Also, 'do remember' is unnecessarily emphatic here; simple present 'remember' is more natural. 'A good focused energy' is incorrect because 'energy' is uncountable here, so the article 'a' should be removed.

× Yes, I do forget important things when I'm stressed or freaked out of some things, or when I'm not in a quiet environment.

✓ Yes, I do forget important things when I'm stressed or freaked out about some things, or when I'm not in a quiet environment.

The phrase 'freaked out of some things' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'about' after 'freaked out'. This is a preposition usage error (ID 11), but since only errors in the provided list are to be corrected, and 'freaked out of' is a preposition error, it is corrected here.

× I do need to remember quite a lot of things in my daily routine. First I have to go to the office at a certain time, so I have to keep track of that. And I have to perform certain things in a limited time, so I keep my schedule and to remember that I write those things.

✓ I do need to remember quite a lot of things in my daily routine. First, I have to go to the office at a certain time, so I have to keep track of that. And I have to perform certain tasks in a limited time, so I keep my schedule and to remember that I write those things down.

The word 'things' is vague; 'tasks' is more appropriate here to refer to activities to perform. Also, 'write those things' is incomplete; adding 'down' completes the phrasal verb 'write down' meaning to record. A comma after 'First' improves sentence clarity.

× I set reminder in my phone to remember all the important things I have to do in my daily life to keep on track and to perform those tasks perfectly and more efficiently.

✓ I set reminders on my phone to remember all the important things I have to do in my daily life to keep on track and to perform those tasks perfectly and more efficiently.

The noun 'reminder' should be plural 'reminders' because it is implied that multiple reminders are set. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to something on a device like a phone.