Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，且部分句子冗长且不连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇，并注意时态一致。

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I usually use tricks to help me. For example, I use apps and make short notes. When learning vocabulary, I set reminders and use flashcards to help me remember.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子结构不完整。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致，避免重复词汇，表达要清晰连贯。

예시: Yes, I once completely forgot a close friend's birthday. Although he didn't say anything at first, I could tell he was disappointed. I felt really bad and made it up by taking her to dinner and buying a gift. Now, I always set reminders to avoid forgetting.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但表达有些不自然，句子连接不够流畅。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

예시: I have many things to remember daily. For example, I need to know my class schedule and keep track of homework. Besides that, I also remember to top up my phone credits and call my family. Therefore, I usually write these down in my notes app.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确的问题，句子结构不完整。建议注意动词形式和搭配，使用更自然的表达方式，并保持句子简洁。

예시: I prefer to rely on my smartphone. I usually set reminders on my phone. For very important things like work meetings or birthdays, I add them to my calendar with notifications. I also use to-do list apps sometimes because I don't fully trust my memory.

× I like using applications or making a short notes for example.

✓ I like using applications or making short notes, for example.

“notes”是复数，前面不需要加不定冠词“a”，应去掉“a”以符合复数形式。

× When I remember the vocabulary I usually set reminders at and I used the flash card to to help me.

✓ When I remember vocabulary, I usually set reminders and I use flashcards to help me.

“set reminders at”后缺少具体时间或地点，且“used”时态不一致，应改为现在时“use”。“flash card”应为复数“flashcards”。

× Yes I was completely forget a a close friend's birthday.

✓ Yes, I completely forgot a close friend's birthday.

“was forget”结构错误，正确用法是过去式“forgot”。

× He didn't say anything at the first but I could tell he was a bit disappointed.

✓ He didn't say anything at first, but I could tell he was a bit disappointed.

短语应为“at first”，不需要加定冠词“the”。

× I feel really bad and later made it up for by treating her to a dinner and buying her a gift.

✓ I felt really bad and later made it up by treating her to dinner and buying her a gift.

前半句应使用过去时“felt”，且“made it up for”应改为“made it up”。“a dinner”前不需要冠词。

× Now I always decided remind us to tell me.

✓ Now I always decide to remind myself to tell me.

“decided”是过去时，应改为现在时“decide”。“remind us to tell me”结构不正确，应为“remind myself”。

× So I actually dropped things down in the notes app to.

✓ So I actually jot things down in the notes app too.

“dropped things down”用法错误，应为“jot things down”。“to”应为“too”，表示“也”。

× I prefer rely on my smartphones.

✓ I prefer to rely on my smartphone.

“prefer”后应接不定式“to rely”。“smartphones”应为单数“smartphone”，指代个人手机。

× I usually cite the reminders on my phone.

✓ I usually set reminders on my phone.

“cite”用法错误，应为“set reminders”。

× If something is really important like a meeting at work or someone's birthday, I will put in my calendars with a notification.

✓ If something is really important like a meeting at work or someone's birthday, I will put it in my calendar with a notification.

“calendars”应为单数“calendar”，且缺少宾语“it”。

× I also use to do lists applications sometimes.

✓ I also use to-do list applications sometimes.

“to do lists”应为复合名词“to-do list”，且“applications”前不需介词“use”。

× Honestly I don't full trust my memory so I'd like to use it.

✓ Honestly, I don't fully trust my memory, so I'd like to use it.

“full”应为副词“fully”修饰动词“trust”。