Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，且没有直接回答问题。建议直接回答问题并用简洁的句子表达，同时避免语法错误。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember important dates and events in my life.

제안: 回答较为自然，但细节不够具体，且表达有些不流畅。建议使用更准确的表达，并补充更多细节使回答更丰富。

예시: Yes, I have. For instance, once my parents asked me to cook rice, but I forgot to add water, so the rice didn't cook properly.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且信息不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇。

예시: I need to remember to exercise every afternoon because I want to lose weight.

제안: 回答重复且表达不流畅，建议避免重复，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明方法。

예시: I usually type important tasks on my phone and check them every morning to help me remember.

× Of course yes I have many good memories since, but I think most important memorizing is I go play with my girlfriend.

✓ Of course, yes. I have many good memories, but I think the most important memory is when I go to play with my girlfriend.

这里“most important memorizing”用词不当，应使用名词“memory”表示“记忆”。此外，句子结构混乱，需调整使表达更清晰。

× One day my parents asked me borrow rice, but I forgot to add the water into the rice.

✓ One day my parents asked me to borrow rice, but I forgot to add water to the rice.

“asked me borrow”缺少不定式“to”，应为“asked me to borrow”。另外，“add the water into the rice”中“the water”不需要定冠词，且介词应为“to”而非“into”。

× Actually, I need to remember every Internet afternoon I need to do some sports because I want to lose the weight.

✓ Actually, I need to remember that every afternoon I need to do some sports because I want to lose weight.

“every Internet afternoon”中的“Internet”用法错误，应去掉。短语“lose the weight”中“the”不应出现，正确用法是“lose weight”。

× Actually, I will type the importance on my phone every day.

✓ Actually, I will type the important things on my phone every day.

“the importance”用法错误，应使用名词短语“the important things”表示“重要的事情”。

× Every day in the morning I will look at the look at this to help me remember that.

✓ Every morning, I will look at this to help me remember.

句子中“look at the look at this”重复且冗余，应删除重复部分，且“Every day in the morning”可简化为“Every morning”。