Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，如“help me record them quickly during text”表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和表达准确性，同时避免冗长。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, when my teacher asks us to learn new vocabulary, I use flashcards and repeat the words several times. This method helps me remember the words better than many of my classmates.

제안: 回答内容完整，但时态使用不当（“I have to”应为过去时），句子较长且缺少连接词，导致表达不够流畅。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. When I was 12, I had to wear my uniform for a school event, but I forgot it. As a result, my teacher scolded me, and I felt very embarrassed because everyone else was dressed formally.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“prevent me from stress that the line brings me”不通顺。建议使用更准确的表达，避免语法错误，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember the shopping list because my mom often asks me to buy groceries. Also, I have to remember my homework to avoid feeling stressed later.

제안: 回答表达基本清晰，但句子结构重复且有些冗长，如“bring it by my side and double check and try to reset it”。建议简化句子，使用连接词提高流畅度，并注意用词准确。

예시: Usually, I write important things in my notebook and keep it with me. Then, I check it regularly and pay close attention to the tasks. This helps me remember important things better.

× Well, when I was 12 years old I have to wear my uniform for an important school event, but unfortunately I totally forgot it and at last I was scolded by my teacher and I felt very embarrassed because everyone dressed formally.

✓ Well, when I was 12 years old I had to wear my uniform for an important school event, but unfortunately I totally forgot it and at last I was scolded by my teacher and I felt very embarrassed because everyone dressed formally.

这里的时间是过去，所以动词时态应该用过去式。'have to' 应该改为过去式 'had to'，表示过去必须做某事。

× For example, I usually use flash cards and repeat the words several times, which help me record them quickly during text.

✓ For example, I usually use flash cards and repeat the words several times, which help me remember them quickly during tests.

'record them quickly during text' 中 'record' 用法不当，应该用 'remember' 表示记住，'during text' 应为 'during tests'，表示在考试期间。

× Well, usually I just grab a notebook and record the things I need to remember down and then I bring it by my side and double check and try to reset it.

✓ Well, usually I just grab a notebook and write down the things I need to remember and then I keep it by my side and double check and try to reset it.

'record the things I need to remember down' 中 'record' 用法不准确，应该用 'write down' 表示写下来；'bring it by my side' 应改为 'keep it by my side'，表示把笔记本放在身边。

× And also remembering what homework I need to finish today is important too because this can prevent me from stress that the line brings me.

✓ And also remembering what homework I need to finish today is important too because this can prevent me from the stress that the deadline brings me.

'prevent me from stress' 应为 'prevent me from the stress'，需要加定冠词；'the line' 应为 'the deadline'，更符合语境，表示截止日期带来的压力。