Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如'memorize'应为'memorising'，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things, but I can remember important information when necessary.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不连贯，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地描述事件，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, once I forgot my ID card when I went to an exam, which was very embarrassing because it was required to enter the classroom.

제안: 句子中有语法错误，如'remember to eat'和'when I am fascinated by films'。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，使句子更自然。

예시: I need to remember to eat on time because I often get so absorbed in watching films that I forget to eat.

제안: 回答结构较好，但最后一句表达不准确，'stay more stressful'应为'reduce stress'或类似表达。建议注意词汇的准确使用。

예시: I usually make a list of important tasks and check it daily to avoid forgetting anything. For example, I write down my tasks on my phone, which helps me stay organized and less stressed.

× No, I'm really bad at memorize things, but if some important things I can memorize it.

✓ No, I'm really bad at memorizing things, but if there are some important things, I can memorize them.

动词短语 'bad at' 后面应该接动名词形式，因此 'memorize' 应改为 'memorizing'。另外，'some important things' 前应加 'there are' 表示存在，'it' 应改为复数 'them' 与 'things' 一致。

× Yes, it's so bad last time I go to the exam, but when I achieve in the classroom I remember I forget to get my ID card.

✓ Yes, it was so bad last time I went to the exam, but when I arrived in the classroom, I remembered I forgot to get my ID card.

描述过去事件时，动词应使用过去时态，'go' 改为 'went'，'achieve' 用错，正确应为 'arrived'，'remember' 和 'forget' 也应改为过去时 'remembered' 和 'forgot'。

× Then it's very important and embarrassed.

✓ Then it was very important and embarrassing.

'embarrassed' 是形容人的情绪，'embarrassing' 用来形容事情或情况，这里应使用 'embarrassing'。同时时态应与前文一致，改为过去时 'was'。

× I think the important thing in my daily life is remember to eat food on time because I'm always forgetting to eating food when I fascinating in film.

✓ I think the important thing in my daily life is to remember to eat food on time because I'm always forgetting to eat food when I'm fascinated by films.

'is' 后面接动词不定式 'to remember'，'forgetting to eating' 中 'to' 后应接动词原形 'eat'，'fascinating' 用错，应为被动形容词 'fascinated'，并且 'in film' 应改为 'by films'。

× I usually make a list for the important things and then I check it every day to make sure I don't forget anything. For example, I write down my task on my phone, which helps me stay more stressful.

✓ I usually make a list of important things and then I check it every day to make sure I don't forget anything. For example, I write down my tasks on my phone, which helps me feel less stressed.

'make a list for' 应改为 'make a list of'，'my task' 应为复数 'my tasks'，'stay more stressful' 用词错误，应为 'feel less stressed' 表达减轻压力的意思。