Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains contradictions, which affects clarity. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with clear reasons or examples. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to sound more natural and confident.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things because I eat healthy foods that help improve my brain function. As a result, I rarely forget important information.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and has many filler words. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence, followed by a specific example. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, last year I missed a meeting with my university professor, which made me feel very embarrassed. After that, I tried to reschedule the meeting to fix the situation.

제안: Your answer covers relevant points but could be more concise and better organized. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid grammatical errors. Also, try to be more specific about why these things are important to remember.

예시: In daily life, it's important to remember appointments with important people and maintain routines like going to the gym or preparing meals. Forgetting these can negatively affect one's health and relationships.

제안: Your answer provides good methods but is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases to make your answer more effective.

예시: I usually set reminders on my phone to remember important tasks. Additionally, I sometimes ask my parents to remind me, and I write notes on paper to keep track of important things.

× I'm really good at this, uh, personality because I can't memorize anything very well and I it's umm, really, really far for me to forget anything.

✓ I'm really good at this, uh, personality because I can't memorize anything very well and it's, umm, really, really hard for me to forget anything.

The phrase 'I it's' is incorrect because it combines two subjects improperly. The correct form is 'it's' (it is) to refer to the situation. Also, 'far' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'hard' to express difficulty.

× For example, last year when I had a a meeting for uh, to my professor at university, I forgot that and I felt a lot of embarrassed and I uh, try to make fix as well.

✓ For example, last year when I had a meeting with my professor at university, I forgot that and I felt very embarrassed and I tried to fix it as well.

The verb 'try' should be in past tense 'tried' to match the past context. Also, 'felt a lot of embarrassed' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'felt very embarrassed'. 'Make fix' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'fix it'. Additionally, 'a a' is a typo and 'for uh, to' is incorrect preposition usage; 'with' is correct for meeting someone.

× For example, last year when I had a a meeting for uh, to my professor at university, I forgot that and I felt a lot of embarrassed and I uh, try to make fix as well.

✓ For example, last year when I had a meeting with my professor at university, I forgot that and I felt very embarrassed and I tried to fix it as well.

The preposition 'for uh, to' is incorrect when referring to meeting someone. The correct preposition is 'with' to indicate the person you met.

× Maybe sometimes it's important to don't forget an appointment with an important person, or sometimes your daily routines such as going to gym or making something for dinner or lunch or talking with your close friends.

✓ Maybe sometimes it's important not to forget an appointment with an important person, or sometimes your daily routines such as going to the gym or making something for dinner or lunch or talking with your close friends.

The phrase 'it's important to don't forget' is incorrect. The correct form is 'it's important not to forget' because 'not' negates the infinitive verb. Also, 'going to gym' should be 'going to the gym' because 'gym' requires the definite article here.

× Maybe sometimes it's important to don't forget an appointment with an important person, or sometimes your daily routines such as going to gym or making something for dinner or lunch or talking with your close friends.

✓ Maybe sometimes it's important not to forget an appointment with an important person, or sometimes your daily routines such as going to the gym or making something for dinner or lunch or talking with your close friends.

The phrase 'going to gym' is missing the definite article 'the'. The correct phrase is 'going to the gym'.

× These are something important that people shouldn't forgot because it has some negative effects on their life.

✓ These are important things that people shouldn't forget because they have some negative effects on their lives.

'These are something important' is incorrect because 'something' is singular and 'these' is plural. It should be 'important things'. Also, 'shouldn't forgot' is incorrect; the correct form is 'shouldn't forget' (base form after modal). 'It has' should be 'they have' to agree with plural 'things'. 'Their life' should be 'their lives' to match plural.

× Maybe I set a reminder for myself, or sometimes I ask my parents to remember something important that I haven't I shouldn't forget it. And to me.

✓ Maybe I set a reminder for myself, or sometimes I ask my parents to remind me of something important so that I don't forget it.

The phrase 'I ask my parents to remember something important that I haven't I shouldn't forget it. And to me.' is confusing and incorrect. The correct expression is 'ask my parents to remind me' because parents remind, not remember for someone. Also, 'I haven't I shouldn't forget it' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be 'so that I don't forget it'.

× Or sometimes I write it down on my hand or in a paper and to see it, to remember that this is important for me.

✓ Or sometimes I write it down on my hand or on a piece of paper and look at it to remember that this is important to me.

The phrase 'in a paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on a piece of paper'. Also, 'to see it' is better expressed as 'look at it' in this context. 'Important for me' is better as 'important to me'.