Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为混乱。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I can remember important information at first, but I often forget it after one or two hours.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用连词使表达更连贯，同时注意单复数和冠词的使用。

예시: Although I sometimes forget small things, I always remember important things because I keep them in my heart and mind.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构和用词有待改进。建议使用更自然的表达，注意冠词和复数形式，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Most of the time, I try to remember important knowledge related to school, work, or homework. Also, I remember small things like my family members' birthdays because they are meaningful to me.

제안: 回答表达了方法，但句子不够流畅且有重复。建议合并句子，使用更自然的表达，并注意词序和搭配。

예시: I always prepare a notebook to write down what I need to do and their deadlines. When I finish a task, I check it off, which gives me a sense of accomplishment.

× I'm not very good at memory things.

✓ I'm not very good at memorising things.

这里'memory things'是不正确的搭配，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆事物的能力。memory是名词，不能直接修饰things。

× if I remember something important easily, but after one or two hours I will forget it, it's difficult for me to remember something.

✓ I can remember something important easily, but after one or two hours I will forget it. It's difficult for me to remember things.

原句结构混乱，使用了if和but连接，导致句子不通顺。应拆分为两个句子，表达更清晰。

× Although I may have a bad memories at small things but in important things I always keep it in my heart and mind and I always think it so important things in my heart is not easy to forget.

✓ Although I may have bad memories about small things, for important things I always keep them in my heart and mind, and I always think that such important things in my heart are not easy to forget.

'a bad memories'中memory应为复数，且不加冠词'a'。'small things'前应使用介词'about'。句子过长且缺少连接词，需调整句子结构。

× Although I may have a bad memories at small things but in important things I always keep it in my heart and mind and I always think it so important things in my heart is not easy to forget.

✓ Although I may have bad memories about small things, for important things I always keep them in my heart and mind, and I always think that such important things in my heart are not easy to forget.

'at small things'应改为'about small things'，因为记忆某事用介词about。

× Most of time I will take the effort to remember some knowledge.

✓ Most of the time I will make an effort to remember some knowledge.

'Most of time'应为'Most of the time'，缺少定冠词'the'。'take the effort'搭配不当，应为'make an effort'。

× Most of time I will take the effort to remember some knowledge.

✓ Most of the time I will make an effort to remember some knowledge.

'Most of time'缺少定冠词'the'，正确表达为'Most of the time'。

× Also, I will remember some little things like my family member's birthday.

✓ Also, I will remember some little things like my family members' birthdays.

'family member's birthday'应为复数形式，表示多个家庭成员的生日，故应为'family members' birthdays'。

× I always prepare a notebook to write down what should I do and the day deadline.

✓ I always prepare a notebook to write down what I should do and the deadline day.

'what should I do'语序错误，陈述句应为'what I should do'。'the day deadline'表达不自然，应为'the deadline day'或'the deadline'。

× When I finish one thing, I will check it out.

✓ When I finish one task, I will check it off.

'check it out'通常表示查看，完成任务应使用'check it off'。

× It can bring a sense of accomplishment. Accomplishment for me.

✓ It can bring me a sense of accomplishment.

第二句'Accomplishment for me.'不完整，应合并为一句完整句子。