Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如"I always forgot"应为"I always forget"，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的时态和更地道的表达方式。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget where I put my keys or my phone.

제안: 回答内容有些混乱，时间表达不清晰，且句子结构不够连贯。建议理清时间顺序，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, about four years ago, I promised my professor to submit an essay, but three days ago, I completely forgot this important deadline.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

예시: In daily life, I need to remember important appointments and meetings, as well as basic things like my keys, phone, and money.

제안: 句子结构不够自然，有语法错误，如"it can always to remind me"应为"it always reminds me"。建议使用更简洁流畅的表达。

예시: I usually rely on technology, like my phone, to record important meetings or appointments using reminder apps, which always notify me on time.

× I always forgot my key and my phone in anywhere.

✓ I always forget my keys and my phone anywhere.

这里的时间状语“always”表示习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时“forget”，而不是过去时“forgot”。另外，“key”应使用复数形式“keys”，因为通常人们有多把钥匙；“in anywhere”是不正确的搭配，应该直接用“anywhere”。

× Definitely about four years ago I made a promise with my professor to submit my essay, but about 3 days ago I completely forgot this important appointment.

✓ Definitely about four years ago I made a promise with my professor to submit my essay, but about 3 days ago I completely forgot this important appointment.

该句中“made”和“forgot”均为过去时，符合时间状语“about four years ago”和“about 3 days ago”，时态使用正确，无需修改。

× Well, I think a lot of things we need to remember.

✓ Well, I think there are a lot of things we need to remember.

“a lot of things”前缺少“there are”结构，且“things”是复数，句子需要完整的主谓结构。

× First of all, some important appointment or some important meetings.

✓ First of all, some important appointments or some important meetings.

“appointment”应使用复数形式“appointments”，因为前面用了“some”，表示不止一个。

× Apart from that, some basic things like keys, phones or monies.

✓ Apart from that, some basic things like keys, phones or money.

“money”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“monies”。

× We must, we must remember where we find it.

✓ We must, we must remember where we put it.

“find”表示“找到”，这里应表达“放置”的意思，应该用“put”。

× Well, I always rely on the technology like phones and I always record the important meeting or appointments in the app like a reminder and it can always to remind me to do important things.

✓ Well, I always rely on technology like phones and I always record important meetings or appointments in apps like reminders and they can always remind me to do important things.

“the technology”中的“the”不必要，应去掉；“meeting or appointments”应统一复数形式；“in the app like a reminder”应改为“in apps like reminders”；“it can always to remind”中“to”多余，应去掉；“it”应改为复数“they”，与前面的复数“apps”一致。