Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác, làm cho ý không rõ ràng và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: I was good at memorizing things when I was a child, but now that I am older, I have many responsibilities and distractions like social media, so my memory is not as sharp as before.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về việc quên điều gì và lý do tại sao.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things several times, such as my own birthday. This usually happens because I am very busy and have to focus on many tasks at once.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý hợp lý hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my school homework and test dates. Since I have many assignments and deadlines, it's important to keep track of them carefully.

제안: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Since my memory is not always reliable, I use the notes app and set reminders on my iPhone to help me remember important tasks and appointments.

× When I were a child I really good at memorizing things, but now when I was older I have a lot of things to do and I have umm approach with a lot of social media.

✓ When I was a child I was really good at memorizing things, but now that I am older I have a lot of things to do and I have, umm, an approach with a lot of social media.

The verb 'were' is incorrect for the singular subject 'I' in past tense; it should be 'was'. Also, 'I really good' lacks a verb and should be 'I was really good'. The phrase 'when I was older' should be 'now that I am older' to correctly express the present state. 'I have umm approach' is missing an article and should be 'I have an approach'.

× So my memorizing things are is lower and now I can I'm not really good at it.

✓ So my ability to memorize things is lower and now I am not really good at it.

The phrase 'memorizing things are is lower' is grammatically incorrect. 'Memorizing things' is a gerund phrase and should be treated as singular, so 'is' is correct, but the phrase is awkward. It is better to say 'my ability to memorize things is lower'. Also, 'I can I'm not really good at it' is incorrect; it should be 'I am not really good at it'.

× Yeah, there is many time in my life I used to forget something really important for me.

✓ Yeah, there are many times in my life when I used to forget something really important to me.

'There is many time' is incorrect because 'time' is countable here and plural, so it should be 'there are many times'. Also, 'something really important for me' should be 'something really important to me' to use the correct preposition.

× Maybe about my birthday.

✓ Maybe it was about my birthday.

The sentence fragment 'Maybe about my birthday' lacks a verb and is incomplete. Adding 'it was' makes it a complete sentence. Also, 'about' is correct here to indicate the topic.

× Birthday, umm, maybe because I have a lot of things to do and, uh, I spend much attention on many things.

✓ Birthday, umm, maybe because I have a lot of things to do and, uh, I pay much attention to many things.

The phrase 'spend much attention on' is incorrect. The correct collocation is 'pay attention to'.

× That's important. More so it's too important for me, but I have got it.

✓ That's important. Moreover, it's very important to me, but I have got it.

'More so' is incorrect here; 'Moreover' or 'Besides' would be better. 'Too important' implies excessive importance, which is likely not intended; 'very important' is more appropriate.

× Maybe the things that I need to remember in my daily life is my daily life.

✓ Maybe the things that I need to remember in my daily life are related to my daily life.

'The things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. The sentence is also repetitive and unclear; adding 'related to' clarifies the meaning.

× But my homework school, you know, when I entrance to the high school, they have a lot of tests.

✓ But my homework at school, you know, when I enter high school, there are a lot of tests.

'Homework school' is missing a preposition 'at'. 'When I entrance to the high school' is incorrect; it should be 'when I enter high school'. 'They have a lot of tests' is vague; 'there are a lot of tests' is better.

× I have a lot of homework. They have to do improve on team or I do it by myself and it have a deadline at a maybe it's very close, so I have to remember.

✓ I have a lot of homework. I have to improve in a team or do it by myself, and it has a deadline that is maybe very close, so I have to remember.

'They have to do improve on team' is incorrect; it should be 'I have to improve in a team'. 'It have a deadline' should be 'it has a deadline'. The sentence structure is also corrected for clarity.

× Because my memory didn't always serve me right.

✓ Because my memory doesn't always serve me right.

The context is about a general truth or current state, so present tense 'doesn't' is appropriate rather than past tense 'didn't'.

× So to remember important things I, I have to know it in my in the app notes in my iPhone so I can check it every time.

✓ So to remember important things, I have to note them in the Notes app on my iPhone so I can check them every time.

'Have to know it in my in the app notes' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'note them in the Notes app'. Also, 'in my iPhone' should be 'on my iPhone'.

× And also I check I turn on the reminder on my phone so it will remind me many things that are important I have to do in my life.

✓ And also I turn on the reminders on my phone so it will remind me of many important things I have to do in my life.

'I check I turn on the reminder' is incorrect; 'I turn on the reminders' is correct. Also, 'remind me many things' should be 'remind me of many things'.