Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不够自然，例如“for forget”和“keep me notice”不正确。建议注意动词形式和短语搭配，回答时尽量简洁且逻辑清晰。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget where I put my keys or my phone. Therefore, I usually set alarms or reminders to help me remember important deadlines.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇“he he”，语法结构不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意时态和连贯性。

예시: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday. He was very upset, so I apologized immediately and promised him that I would never forget it again.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“appoint with him again”应为“make another appointment”。建议注意动词搭配和句子结构，使表达更准确。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember project deadlines and important appointments. For instance, I once forgot a dentist appointment and had to reschedule it.

제안: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰，如“through the technology or my such as my smartphone”不合语法。建议简化句子，使用正确的短语和时态。

예시: I usually use technology like my smartphone to remember important things. I set reminders and alarms on my calendar app to make sure I don't forget anything important.

× I often for forget where I've placed my key on my phone, so I usually set an alarm or some reminder to keep me notice the deadline of the meeting.

✓ I often forget where I've placed my key or my phone, so I usually set an alarm or some reminder to help me notice the deadline of the meeting.

句中“for forget”是错误的，正确用法是“forget”，因为“forget”是动词，前面不需要“for”。另外，“keep me notice”应改为“help me notice”，使表达更自然。

× I often for forget where I've placed my key on my phone, so I usually set an alarm or some reminder to keep me notice the deadline of the meeting.

✓ I often forget where I've placed my key or my phone, so I usually set an alarm or some reminder to help me notice the deadline of the meeting.

“placed my key on my phone”中的“on”使用不当，应改为“or”表示“钥匙或手机”，因为钥匙不可能放在手机上。

× Oh yes, I have ever forgotten my best friend's birthday and he he is very angry about it and I apologize to him immediately and I promise I will never forget it again.

✓ Oh yes, I have forgotten my best friend's birthday and he was very angry about it. I apologized to him immediately and I promise I will never forget it again.

“have ever forgotten”用法不当，应为“have forgotten”表示经历；“he he”重复，应删去一个；“he is very angry”时态不符，描述过去事件应为“he was very angry”；“apologize”应使用过去式“apologized”，因为动作发生在过去。

× Oh yes, I have ever forgotten my best friend's birthday and he he is very angry about it and I apologize to him immediately and I promise I will never forget it again.

✓ Oh yes, I have forgotten my best friend's birthday and he was very angry about it. I apologized to him immediately and I promise I will never forget it again.

“angry about it”中的“about”使用正确，无需修改。此处无明显介词错误。

× Like last time I forgot the appointment I made with my dentist so I lost the chance to check my teeth.

✓ Like last time, I forgot the appointment I made with my dentist, so I lost the chance to have my teeth checked.

“check my teeth”应改为被动结构“have my teeth checked”，因为是别人帮忙检查牙齿。

× I have to appoint with him again.

✓ I have to make an appointment with him again.

“appoint with him”用法错误，应使用“make an appointment with him”表示“预约”。

× Oh I usually remember things through the technology or my such as my smartphone.

✓ Oh, I usually remember things through technology or my devices such as my smartphone.

“my such as my smartphone”结构不正确，应改为“my devices such as my smartphone”使表达完整且正确。

× I use calendar as some reminder apps and alarms to avoid me forgot important things.

✓ I use calendar and some reminder apps and alarms to avoid forgetting important things.

“calendar as some reminder apps”表达不清，应改为“calendar and some reminder apps”；“to avoid me forgot”语法错误，应为“to avoid forgetting”。