Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and correcting sentence structure. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things because I studied botany, which required me to remember many plant names. As a result, I performed well in exams by recalling these details accurately.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and finish your sentences fully. Use linking words to explain your habits clearly and provide specific examples.

예시: Sometimes I do forget important things, but I usually prevent this by making to-do lists. I prioritize tasks by categorizing them as primary or secondary, which helps me stay organized.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains repetition and minor errors. Try to avoid repeating words and use more precise vocabulary. Also, link your ideas smoothly.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks based on their priority, so I create to-do lists. Additionally, I use my calendar to note important dates and deadlines to stay organized.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more structured. Avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your points logically.

예시: I remember important things by making lists and setting reminders on my calendar. Besides that, I try to keep key tasks in my mind to ensure I don't forget them.

× I believe I am pretty much good in memorizing things because I am a student of I was a student of botany.

✓ I believe I am pretty good at memorizing things because I was a student of botany.

The phrase 'good in memorizing' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'good at' when referring to skills. Also, 'I am a student of I was a student of botany' is redundant and confusing; since the student is referring to past experience, 'I was a student of botany' is appropriate.

× In botany you have we have to memorize a lot of plants name and I, I did really very well in remembering the names of the plants and scoring a good creed.

✓ In botany, we have to memorize a lot of plant names, and I did really well in remembering the names of the plants and scoring a good grade.

The phrase 'plants name' should be pluralized to 'plant names' to match the plural noun. Also, 'creed' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'grade'. The sentence also needed punctuation for clarity.

× I believe I really umm, forget important things because I have a habit of making note of umm, important things.

✓ I believe I rarely forget important things because I have a habit of making notes of important things.

The original sentence suggests the student forgets important things, but context implies the opposite. Using 'rarely' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'making note' should be 'making notes' for correct usage.

× I may I normally make To Do List like uh, which work I have to do first, then second.

✓ I normally make a To-Do List, like which work I have to do first, then second.

The phrase 'make To Do List' needs an article 'a' before 'To-Do List'. Also, 'may I' is unnecessary and confusing here.

× So I categorize my work in primary and secondary manner and.

✓ So I categorize my work in a primary and secondary manner.

The phrase 'in primary and secondary manner' requires the article 'a' before 'primary'. The sentence was incomplete, so the correction ends appropriately.

× As I said, I normally make A to do list according to the prioritization prioritization of the world.

✓ As I said, I normally make a to-do list according to the prioritization of the work.

The phrase 'prioritization prioritization of the world' is incorrect and likely a repetition error; it should be 'prioritization of the work'. Also, 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with correct capitalization and hyphenation.

× Apart from them, I also put a note on my calendar so that I remember in which particular date I have to do which work.

✓ Apart from them, I also put a note on my calendar so that I remember on which particular date I have to do which work.

The phrase 'remember in which particular date' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to dates.

× I remember important things by making their list and putting reminders on the calendars.

✓ I remember important things by making lists and putting reminders on the calendar.

'Their list' is incorrect because 'their' does not refer to anything specific here; 'lists' is more appropriate. Also, 'the calendars' should be 'the calendar' unless multiple calendars are meant.

× And most often I try not to forget important things. Usually I keep it in my mind.

✓ And most often I try not to forget important things. Usually, I keep them in my mind.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'important things' which is plural; therefore, 'them' is the correct pronoun.