Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ достаточно информативен, но содержит некоторые грамматические ошибки и повторения, например, "fact" должно быть во множественном числе, а фраза "in school" повторяется. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для лучшей связности и избегать излишней длины.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing information. For instance, I can easily remember facts about subjects like geography, biology, and history because I find them very interesting. This ability helps me perform well at school and understand the world better.

제안: Ответ содержит смысл, но есть ошибки в грамматике и стилистике, например, "The last year" лучше заменить на "Last year", а "wait there long, a long time" звучит неестественно. Рекомендуется использовать более плавные связки и точные выражения.

예시: Yes, last year I forgot to pick up my brother from school, and he had to wait there for a long time. It was very important because he was alone, and I felt really bad about it.

제안: Ответ непонятен и содержит ошибки, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется строить предложения ясно и логично, использовать связующие слова и конкретизировать информацию.

예시: Every day, I need to remember the time when I have to pick up my brother from school to make sure he is not left waiting.

제안: Ответ содержит повторения и грамматические ошибки, например, "help" должно быть "helps", а "anything anything" — повтор. Также стоит использовать более точные выражения и связки для улучшения связности.

예시: I usually write down important things in my notebook. This method helps me organize my tasks and ensures I don't forget anything important, such as meetings or opportunities.

× I can easily remember fact about different subject like geography, biology and history because I find them very interesting.

✓ I can easily remember facts about different subjects like geography, biology and history because I find them very interesting.

The word 'fact' should be plural 'facts' because it refers to multiple pieces of information. Similarly, 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' to match the plural context. This is a singular and plural issue.

× This ability helps me perform well at school, in school and understand the world better.

✓ This ability helps me perform well at school and understand the world better.

The phrase 'at school, in school' is redundant and incorrect. The correct preposition is 'at school' to indicate location. Using both is unnecessary and incorrect.

× The last year I forgot to pick up my brother from school and he had to wait there long, a long time.

✓ Last year I forgot to pick up my brother from school and he had to wait there a long time.

The phrase 'The last year' should be 'Last year' to correctly indicate past time. Also, 'wait there long, a long time' is redundant; 'wait there a long time' is correct. This is a past tense and sentence structure issue.

× he was very alone and I felt really bad about it.

✓ he was very alone and I felt really bad about it.

No correction needed here; sentence is grammatically correct.

× Every day I neither remember time about when I need to pick up my brother from school, so he didn't.

✓ Every day I neither remember the time when I need to pick up my brother from school, so he doesn't.

The phrase 'remember time about when' is incorrect; it should be 'remember the time when'. Also, 'so he didn't' is incorrect in present context; it should be 'so he doesn't'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and tense issue.

× Every day I neither remember the time when I need to pick up my brother from school, so he doesn't.

✓ Every day I neither remember the time when I need to pick up my brother from school, so he has to go by himself.

The phrase 'so he doesn't' is unclear and incorrect here. It should be replaced with 'so he has to go by himself' to express the consequence properly. This relates to modal verb usage and sentence clarity.

× I usually write down important things in my notebook and or my book there.

✓ I usually write down important things in my notebook or my book.

The phrase 'and or' is incorrect; it should be either 'and' or 'or'. Also, 'my book there' is awkward; 'my book' suffices. This is an issue with conjunction and sentence structure.

× This method help me organize my things and that I don't forget anything anything important, for example when I have meeting or opportunity.

✓ This method helps me organize my things so that I don't forget anything important, for example when I have a meeting or an opportunity.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'method'. The phrase 'and that I don't forget' is incorrect; 'so that I don't forget' is correct. Also, 'anything anything' is repeated and should be singular. 'Meeting' and 'opportunity' need articles 'a'. This is subject-verb agreement and article usage issue.