Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating similar points. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For instance, I often forget where I put my keys or my phone, which can be quite frustrating.

제안: Your answer is clear and provides reasons, but there are some grammar mistakes and slight repetition. Use linking words to improve coherence and check verb forms.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I often misplace my keys because I get easily distracted, which makes it hard to focus and remember details.

제안: Your answer is too brief and contains grammatical errors. Provide more specific details and use correct verb tenses. Also, explain why remembering keys is important.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my keys because I live alone and locking the door is essential for my safety.

제안: Your answer is relevant and detailed but has grammar mistakes and incomplete sentences. Use plural forms correctly and complete your thoughts. Also, use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I usually remember important things by writing them down in my notebook and setting reminders on my phone. This helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting important tasks or appointments. For example, I make a to-do list every morning to keep track of my daily activities.

× I often forgot where I put my keys, my mobile phone, my clips, and I can't remember anything but.

✓ I often forget where I put my keys, my mobile phone, my clips, and I can't remember anything else.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used. Also, 'anything but' is incorrect here; 'anything else' is the correct phrase to indicate additional items not remembered.

× I think this happened because I get easily distracted so I found I find it hard to focus and remember details.

✓ I think this happens because I get easily distracted, so I find it hard to focus and remember details.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Happened' should be 'happens' to match the present tense context. Also, 'found I find' is redundant and incorrect; 'I find' is correct.

× I need to remember my keys in my daily life because I'm alone at home whenever I went.

✓ I need to remember my keys in my daily life because I'm alone at home whenever I go.

The phrase 'whenever I went' uses past tense incorrectly. Since the sentence is about habitual action, the present tense 'whenever I go' should be used.

× I usually remember important things by writing thing down in my notebook or setting reminders on my phone.

✓ I usually remember important things by writing things down in my notebook or setting reminders on my phone.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple important things being written down.

× This helps me to organize and ensure I don't get forgot any important tax or appointment.

✓ This helps me to organize and ensure I don't forget any important task or appointment.

The phrase 'get forgot' is incorrect; the correct form is 'forget'. Also, 'tax' is likely a typo and should be 'task'.

× For example, I always make To Do List every morning to keep track of my.

✓ For example, I always make a To-Do List every morning to keep track of my tasks.

The sentence is incomplete and missing the object after 'my'. Adding 'tasks' completes the sentence. Also, 'To Do List' should be hyphenated as 'To-Do List' and preceded by an article 'a'.