Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như từ 'memorable' được sử dụng không đúng cách. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget important dates or details, which can be frustrating.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng (forgot nên là forget hoặc have forgotten) và tránh lặp từ 'at school' nhiều lần. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng từ nối để liệt kê các ví dụ.

예시: Yes, I have. For example, I often forget my friend's birthday, or sometimes I leave my wallet or phone at school.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ lóng như 'Nah' trong bài thi và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn, ví dụ như 'I must remember'.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks like my homework and appointments to stay organized.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi khó hiểu và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'think it on my head' không đúng. Bạn nên diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

예시: When I want to remember something important, I usually ask myself questions about it and try to focus carefully to keep it in my mind.

× I just think that my memorable is not good.

✓ I just think that my memory is not good.

The word 'memorable' is an adjective meaning 'worth remembering', but here the noun 'memory' should be used to refer to the ability to remember things. Replace 'memorable' with 'memory' to correct the sentence.

× I often forget something special and important to me.

✓ I often forget things special and important to me.

The word 'something' is singular, but the context implies multiple items. Using 'things' (plural) is more appropriate to match the meaning.

× I often forgot my friend's birthday or somethings like my wallet at school, my phone at school.

✓ I often forget my friend's birthday or things like my wallet at school, my phone at school.

The adverb 'often' indicates habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used instead of the past tense 'forgot'. Also, 'somethings' is incorrect; 'things' is the correct plural form.

× I often forgot my friend's birthday or somethings like my wallet at school, my phone at school.

✓ I often forget my friend's birthday or things like my wallet at school, my phone at school.

The word 'somethings' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'things'.

× Nah, actually I don't think I need to remember things in my daily life because umm, it's not necessary, but in some case I must be remember, like my homework.

✓ Nah, actually I don't think I need to remember things in my daily life because umm, it's not necessary, but in some cases I must remember, like my homework.

The phrase 'in some case' should be plural 'in some cases' to indicate multiple instances. Also, 'must be remember' is incorrect; the correct form is 'must remember' because 'must' is a modal verb followed by the base form of the verb.

× Nah, actually I don't think I need to remember things in my daily life because umm, it's not necessary, but in some case I must be remember, like my homework.

✓ Nah, actually I don't think I need to remember things in my daily life because umm, it's not necessary, but in some cases I must remember, like my homework.

'Must' is a modal verb and should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'be'. Therefore, 'must be remember' is incorrect; it should be 'must remember'.

× Well, when I want to remember something, I will sit down and make some questions about these things and I will think it on my head.

✓ Well, when I want to remember something, I will sit down and make some questions about these things and I will think about it in my head.

The verb 'think' is usually followed by the preposition 'about' when referring to considering something. Also, the correct preposition for location in the mind is 'in', not 'on'. So, 'think it on my head' should be 'think about it in my head'.