Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your methods with specific details.

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I usually prepare a shopping list and use a calendar to remind me of special occasions like birthdays.

제안: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to use past tense correctly and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to make your story clearer and more coherent.

예시: Yes, a few months ago I forgot my dentist appointment. I only realized it when the hospital receptionist called to remind me that I had missed it.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Try to organize your ideas logically and use complete sentences. Be specific about what you need to remember and how you do it, using linking words to connect your points.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember phone numbers and appointments. For short-term things, I rely on my phone reminders, and for longer-term plans, I write them down in my diary or check my calendar regularly.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly explain your methods in a logical order, using linking words. Also, avoid fragmented sentences and improve verb usage.

예시: Whenever I make appointments with doctors or book exams, I set reminders on my phone. I also tell my husband so he can help remind me.

× No, I'm not going to remember all the things so that's why I need to prepare some list whenever I go for shopping and remember to others birthday.

✓ No, I can't remember all the things, so that's why I need to prepare a list whenever I go shopping and remember others' birthdays.

The phrase 'I'm not going to remember' is incorrect here because it implies a future intention rather than an ability or habit. Using 'can't remember' correctly expresses the inability to remember. Also, 'some list' should be 'a list' (article error), and 'remember to others birthday' should be 'remember others' birthdays' (possessive plural).

× And I always applied calendar so I can easily give reminders on this for the special.

✓ And I always use a calendar so I can easily set reminders for special occasions.

The verb 'applied' is incorrect here; the present tense 'use' fits better to express habitual action. Also, 'give reminders on this for the special' is awkward; 'set reminders for special occasions' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, one time a few months ago I forgotten my appointment appointment with the dentist.

✓ Yes, one time a few months ago I forgot my appointment with the dentist.

The verb 'forgotten' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb (e.g., 'have'). Since this is a simple past event, the simple past 'forgot' is correct. Also, 'appointment' is repeated unnecessarily.

× I didn't realize that I forgot that thing until that I received the call from the hospital and that I receptionist reminded me I have missed my appointment with the dentist.

✓ I didn't realize I had forgotten until I received a call from the hospital and the receptionist reminded me that I had missed my appointment with the dentist.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced words ('that I', 'that I receptionist'). The past perfect 'had forgotten' and 'had missed' are appropriate to indicate actions completed before another past action. Also, 'a call' and 'the receptionist' are correct article uses.

× Uh, I little things are numbers only for the one day for the long days, uh, I need to apply reminder on my phone to sometimes I note down on my diary and when if I read and calendars remind me all the things I applied this, this.

✓ Uh, the little things are numbers only for one day; for longer periods, I need to set reminders on my phone. Sometimes I note things down in my diary, and when I read it, the calendar reminds me of everything I have recorded.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'I little things' should be 'the little things'; 'apply reminder' should be 'set reminders'; 'note down on my diary' should be 'note things down in my diary'; 'calendars' should be singular 'calendar' or 'the calendar'; and the sentence structure is confusing and fragmented. The correction clarifies and corrects these errors.

× I fixed the whenever I fixed my appointment with their doctors and booked my exam so that time I applied.

✓ Whenever I fix my appointment with my doctor and book my exam, I set a reminder at that time.

The phrase 'I fixed the whenever' is incorrect and confusing. 'Fixed' should be 'fix' to match habitual present tense. 'Their doctors' should be 'my doctor' for correct possessive pronoun. 'Applied' is incorrect here; 'set a reminder' is appropriate. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Set a reminder on my mobile phone and I tell to my husband he remind me easily.

✓ I set a reminder on my mobile phone and tell my husband; he reminds me easily.

'Tell to my husband' is incorrect; 'tell my husband' is correct. Also, 'he remind me' should be 'he reminds me' to agree with third person singular subject. The sentence is corrected for pronoun and subject-verb agreement.