Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như cách dùng từ chưa chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp lại ý không cần thiết và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things because I prefer to focus on the present and prepare for the future. I believe this approach is more effective than dwelling on the past.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, tránh dùng những cụm từ không phù hợp như "it's not very recognized". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I once forgot to bring my homework to school when I was a child. It was a bad experience because I got into trouble with my teacher.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my homework because studying helps me improve my knowledge. I usually make a schedule to keep track of my tasks.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ hợp lý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ cách bạn ghi chú.

예시: I usually take notes to remember important things because I have many tasks to do. For example, I write down deadlines and important points in a notebook.

× Instead, we can prefer in the present and prepare to things in the future.

✓ Instead, we can prefer the present and prepare for things in the future.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used after 'prefer'; the correct phrase is 'prefer the present'. Also, 'prepare to things' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'prepare for things'.

× I forgot to bring my homework to a school because it's not very recognized and I think it's a bad experience for me over the periods.

✓ I forgot to bring my homework to school because it's not very recognized and I think it's a bad experience for me over the periods.

The article 'a' before 'school' is unnecessary when referring to school in general. The phrase should be 'bring my homework to school'.

× I think I need to remember homework in my daily life because my daily life involves studying and I think study will be will improve my knowledge and awareness.

✓ I think I need to remember homework in my daily life because my daily life involves studying and I think studying will improve my knowledge and awareness.

The word 'study' should be in the gerund form 'studying' to function as the subject of the clause. Also, 'will be will improve' is redundant; it should be 'will improve'. However, only the gerund form error is corrected as per instructions.

× I need to remember it over the period at that time.

✓ I need to remember it over the period.

The phrase 'at that time' is unnecessary and awkward here. 'Over the period' sufficiently conveys the meaning.

× Well, when I need to remember important things, I usually take note, because take note helps me remember what I need to do, what I need to learn at that time, because it's too difficult for me to remember all this because it has many things in my mind.

✓ Well, when I need to remember important things, I usually take notes, because taking notes helps me remember what I need to do and what I need to learn at that time, as it's too difficult for me to remember all these things because I have many things on my mind.

The phrase 'take note' should be plural 'take notes' when referring to the action generally. Also, 'take note helps' should be 'taking notes helps' to use the gerund form as the subject. 'All this' should be 'all these things' to correctly refer to multiple items. 'It has many things in my mind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I have many things on my mind'.