Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to sound more natural and confident. Also, try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things. Since childhood, I have used a technique to memorise multiplication tables from 1 to 30, and I still remember them clearly.

제안: Your answer is relevant and detailed, but it can be improved by breaking the long sentence into shorter ones and using linking words like 'however' or 'fortunately' to make it more coherent. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'from my home'.

예시: Yes, I once forgot my examination hall ticket at home. Fortunately, my house is very close to the exam centre, so I went back to get it without any problem.

제안: Your answer covers the topic but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to organise your ideas better by using linking words like 'firstly' and 'also'. Avoid repetition such as 'most important' multiple times. Use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar, for example, 'all my important things' instead of 'my all my important things'.

예시: Firstly, I need to remember my basic daily routine to stay organised. Also, I always make sure to carry my wallet because it contains all my important items.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve it by avoiding redundancy such as 'personal diary' and 'in which'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and check subject-verb agreement, for example, 'my To Do List is' should be 'my To Do List are' if plural.

예시: I usually carry a pocket notebook where I write down all important things. For instance, I note my appointments and To-Do lists to help me remember them.

× I did memorize uh tables from UH-1 to 30 and I still remember them.

✓ I memorized tables from 1 to 30 and I still remember them.

The use of 'did memorize' is unnecessary here; the simple past tense 'memorized' is sufficient and more natural. Also, 'UH-1' seems to be a typo or unclear; corrected to '1'. Using the simple past tense correctly indicates a completed action in the past.

× My all my important things are kept in my wallet.

✓ All my important things are kept in my wallet.

The phrase 'My all my' is redundant and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'All my', which properly refers to the plural 'things'. Removing the extra 'My' corrects the sentence.

× It's my personal diary where I in which I write all my important things that I need to remember.

✓ It's my personal diary in which I write all my important things that I need to remember.

The phrase 'where I in which I' is incorrect and redundant. The correct preposition is 'in which' to refer to the diary as a place where writing happens. Removing 'where I' fixes the sentence.

× All my appointments and my To Do List is mentioned in my diary.

✓ All my appointments and my To Do List are mentioned in my diary.

The subject is compound ('appointments' and 'To Do List'), so the verb should be plural 'are' instead of singular 'is' to agree with the plural subject.