Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to be more precise and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I can easily remember important dates as well as people's names and faces, which helps me in social situations.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. You should directly answer the question and provide specific examples with clear explanations. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things, especially during exams. For example, sometimes I forget answers because I feel nervous after reading all the subjects.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid repeating phrases and try to explain your points more clearly with linking words.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to wake up early for work. However, I often forget things if I am still sleepy, which makes it challenging to stay organized.

제안: Your answer is contradictory and confusing. You should clearly explain your methods for remembering important things and provide examples to support your answer.

예시: To remember important things, I usually write them down or set reminders on my phone. For example, I save my phone password in a secure place so I don't forget it.

× I usually remember the numerous or or dates and the name and the face of the people I memorized.

✓ I usually remember numerous dates and the names and faces of the people I memorized.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'the numerous or or dates' which is unclear and redundant. 'Numerous' should directly modify 'dates' without 'or or'. Also, 'the name and the face of the people' should be pluralized to 'names and faces' to agree with 'people' which is plural.

× I usually remember the numerous or or dates and the name and the face of the people I memorized.

✓ I usually remember numerous dates and the names and faces of the people I have memorized.

The verb 'memorized' refers to a past action related to the present, so the present perfect tense 'have memorized' is more appropriate to indicate an action completed in the past with relevance to the present.

× I've forgotten something important, especially in the exam. So for example I can when I read all the subjects.

✓ I've forgotten something important, especially during exams. For example, I sometimes forget when I read all the subjects.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'So for example I can when I read all the subjects' is incomplete and lacks a main verb. The correction clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× I've forgotten something important, especially in the exam.

✓ I've forgotten something important, especially during the exam.

The preposition 'in' is less appropriate here; 'during' correctly indicates the time period when the forgetting happened.

× I need to remember that I have to work early in the morning.

✓ I need to remember that I have to work early in the morning.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the present tense context, so no correction is needed.

× I usually I don't remember anything whenever I'm sleeping.

✓ Usually, I don't remember anything when I'm sleeping.

The original sentence has redundant words and awkward phrasing. Removing the extra 'I' and replacing 'whenever' with 'when' improves clarity and correctness.

× I remember important things. Probably I don't remember anything, especially my phone password.

✓ I remember important things, but I probably don't remember anything else, especially my phone password.

The original sentences are disjointed and unclear. Combining them with 'but' and clarifying the contrast improves coherence and sentence flow.