Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且句子较长且重复，建议简化句子结构，避免口语填充词，使用更准确的表达。

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I usually write down my daily tasks on paper. This helps me remember better because I can refer to my notes whenever needed.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁自然。建议减少重复，注意主谓一致，使用连贯的连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I always make a list and underline the most important tasks to ensure I don't miss them.

제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少句子结尾，建议完整表达观点，避免口语填充词，使用清晰的句子结构。

예시: Since I major in clinical medicine, I need to remember each patient's illness and every step of the operation carefully to avoid mistakes.

제안: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达不清，且句子不完整。建议使用正确的词汇和句型，避免口语化表达，确保句子完整。

예시: As a student, I always carry a pen and notebook. When I encounter urgent or important things, I write them down clearly so I don't forget.

× I prefer to write all the things I have to do in my daily routines on a paper.

✓ I prefer to write all the things I have to do in my daily routine on paper.

daily routines 应为 daily routine，表示日常生活的习惯，通常用单数形式。on a paper 应为 on paper，表示在纸上，不需要冠词。

× on a paper

✓ on paper

在英语中，表示材料时通常不加冠词，故应为 on paper 而非 on a paper。

× the week is in last longer than the strongest memory.

✓ The week lasts longer than the strongest memory.

原句结构混乱，正确表达应为 The week lasts longer than the strongest memory，意为“时间比记忆更持久”。

× So as far as I'm not good at memorizing, I tend to make a plan before I.

✓ Since I'm not good at memorizing, I tend to make a plan beforehand.

原句中 So as far as 用法不当，应使用 Since 表示原因；before I 后缺少动作，改为 beforehand 更合适。

× I tend to make a list of the things I have to do so I haven't forgotten to do something important.

✓ I tend to make a list of the things I have to do so I don't forget to do something important.

时态不一致，使用现在时态更符合语境，haven't forgotten 改为 don't forget。

× I will underline the things that is important.

✓ I will underline the things that are important.

things 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 are。

× I would say it, you know, I now major in clinical medical, so I need to remember the illness of each patient and I also need to I also can't forget about every process in this operation, otherwise I will be criticized by.

✓ I would say, you know, I now major in clinical medicine, so I need to remember the illness of each patient and I also can't forget any process in the operation, otherwise I will be criticized.

clinical medical 应为 clinical medicine；句子中重复且结构混乱，去除多余部分，使句子通顺； criticized 后不需要 by。

× I always have a pain in my pocket.

✓ I always have a pen in my pocket.

pain（疼痛）与语境不符，应为 pen（钢笔）。

× So when I came across the urgent and important things, I will prefer to ride all them down.

✓ So when I come across urgent and important things, I prefer to write them all down.

came 应为 come，时态应与一般现在时一致；ride 应为 write；all them 应为 them all。

× So that's the way I tend to.

✓ So that's the way I tend to remember things.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，补充完整使句意明确。