Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答语法和表达不够准确，存在语法错误和用词不当，如“memory things”应为“memorising things”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且回答时尽量简洁明了。

예시: No, I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget where I put my belongings, even though my mother reminds me to keep them in the right place.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I'm always forget”应为“I always forget”。建议使用连贯的句子，并且提供更具体的细节来丰富回答。

예시: Yes, I often forget to bring my umbrella when I go outside, and sometimes I even leave my cell phone at home by mistake.

제안: 回答中时态和语法使用不准确，如“was having”应为“have”，并且句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确时态，并且更具体地说明需要记忆的内容。

예시: As a student, I need to remember various knowledge from my classes, so I study and review my textbooks regularly to achieve good grades.

제안: 回答表达不够自然，存在语法错误，如“make me easily to remember it”应为“make it easier for me to remember”。建议使用更流畅的表达，并且说明具体的方法。

예시: I usually write important information in my notebook to help me remember it easily, and I review my notes daily to reinforce my memory.

× No I think I'm not good at memory things because actually my mom always tell me don't put the things in the wrong places but I always forget it.

✓ No, I think I'm not good at memorizing things because actually my mom always tells me not to put things in the wrong places, but I always forget it.

动词tell在第三人称单数时应加-s，变为tells。此处主语是my mom，属于第三人称单数，动词需与主语一致。

× No I think I'm not good at memory things because actually my mom always tell me don't put the things in the wrong places but I always forget it.

✓ No, I think I'm not good at memorizing things because actually my mom always tells me not to put things in the wrong places, but I always forget it.

memory things用法不正确，应使用动名词memorizing things表示记忆的动作。

× So I think memories things is not good.

✓ So I think memorizing things is not good.

memories things搭配错误，应使用动名词memorizing things。

× When I go outside I always forget my umbrella and put it in the 711 boxes.

✓ When I go outside, I always forget my umbrella and put it in the 7-11 box.

711 boxes应为单数box，因为通常指一个地方，且7-11是专有名词，需正确书写。

× And when I go out I'm always forget my cell phone too.

✓ And when I go out, I always forget my cell phone too.

I'm always forget结构错误，应为I always forget，主语和动词需一致，且不需使用进行时。

× I need to reading book remember it so I can get a high score.

✓ I need to read books and remember them so I can get a high score.

to后面应接动词原形，reading应改为read；book应为复数books；remember it改为remember them以指代复数。

× I will write it down in my notebook to make me easily to remember it and if it's about the knowledge, I will prepare it every day to make me more memorized.

✓ I will write it down in my notebook to make it easier for me to remember it, and if it's about knowledge, I will review it every day to memorize it better.

make me easily to remember结构不正确，应为make it easier for me to remember；prepare it用词不当，改为review；more memorized用法错误，应为memorize it better。