Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: คำตอบของคุณควรตรงประเด็นและชัดเจนมากขึ้น โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถามโดยตรง และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเพิ่มความลื่นไหล เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so' ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้องและเหมาะสม เช่น 'I have developed a habit of writing everything down in my notebook to avoid forgetting important things.'

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget important details. Therefore, I have developed a habit of writing everything down in my notebook to help me remember.

제안: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมอย่างเหมาะสม เช่น 'so' หรือ 'therefore' เพื่อเชื่อมประโยค และควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'major' แทน 'majority' และปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I forgot to bring my ID card to the registration office, so I had to go back and get it.'

예시: Yes, I have. For example, when I was choosing my major at university, I forgot to bring my ID card to the registration office, so I had to return home to get it.

제안: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so' เพื่อเชื่อมความคิด และใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'work tasks' แทน 'working tasks' และปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'I have to remember many complex work tasks, so I always write them down in my notebook.'

예시: In my daily life, I have to remember many complex work tasks because they can be difficult to keep track of. Therefore, I always write them down in my notebook.

제안: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'so' และ 'because' ให้ถูกต้อง และใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'take notes' และ 'keep track of tasks' รวมถึงปรับประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น 'I always take notes on my phone because it's convenient and helps me keep track of important tasks.'

예시: I always take notes on my phone because it's convenient and helps me keep track of important tasks, ensuring I don't forget anything.

× I think I'm not that kind of person who has a good memory because I always forget important things in my daily life, so I have to take the habit that make everything done in my notebook.

✓ I think I'm not that kind of person who has a good memory because I always forget important things in my daily life, so I have to take the habit of making everything done in my notebook.

The phrase 'take the habit that make' is incorrect because 'make' should be in the gerund form 'making' after 'habit of'. The correct phrase is 'take the habit of making'. This is because after 'habit of', a verb should be in the -ing form to indicate the action habitually done.

× To be honest, yes, when I choose my majority in university, I forgot to take my ID card to the registration office so that I have to come back and take it.

✓ To be honest, yes, when I chose my major in university, I forgot to take my ID card to the registration office so I had to come back and take it.

The verb 'choose' should be in the past tense 'chose' to match the past event. Also, 'majority' is incorrect; the correct word is 'major'. Additionally, 'so that I have to come back' should be 'so I had to come back' to maintain past tense consistency.

× In my daily life, I was forced to remember a lot of working tasks during my work, so they are complex and difficult to remember. I always write them down on my notebook.

✓ In my daily life, I am forced to remember a lot of work tasks during my work, so they are complex and difficult to remember. I always write them down in my notebook.

The phrase 'I was forced' should be 'I am forced' to indicate a habitual present action. 'Working tasks' is better expressed as 'work tasks'. Also, the preposition 'on my notebook' is incorrect; it should be 'in my notebook' because we write in notebooks.

× I always write them down on my notebook.

✓ I always write them down in my notebook.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to writing in a notebook. The correct preposition is 'in' because we write inside the pages of a notebook.

× As I mentioned above, I always take notes to make sure that I couldn't forget anything important. So I always take notes on my phone because it's easy to take and I can always keep track of the tasks.

✓ As I mentioned above, I always take notes to make sure that I don't forget anything important. So I always take notes on my phone because it's easy to do and I can always keep track of the tasks.

The phrase 'couldn't forget' is incorrect here; it should be 'don't forget' to express present ability. Also, 'it's easy to take' is unclear; the correct phrase is 'it's easy to do' referring to taking notes. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.