Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且句子较长且重复，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: No, I am not very good at memorising things. When I was young, I had to memorise ancient poems for exams, but I found it very difficult to remember them.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议使用更准确的时态和表达，并且增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, when I was 10 years old, I forgot to attend my karate exam because I was too focused on playing with my friends. I still remember this clearly.

제안: 回答表达不流畅，句子断断续续，建议练习连贯表达，使用完整句子，并注意冠词和复数形式的正确使用。

예시: In my daily life, the most important thing I need to remember is my passport, especially when I go to the train station or airport, because I often forget it.

제안: 回答中句子结构不完整，表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并增加连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I usually prepare important items before packing my luggage. Then, before I leave, I check everything again to make sure I have everything I need.

× No, I didn't think I had a good memories because when I was little, when I was young in in our Chinese class we always need to memorize some ancient poetries for preparation examination, but I can't remember at all.

✓ No, I didn't think I had good memory because when I was little, when I was young in our Chinese class we always needed to memorize some ancient poetry for preparation examination, but I couldn't remember at all.

“memories”应为不可数名词“memory”；“poetries”应为不可数名词“poetry”；“need”时态应与过去时间一致，改为“needed”；“can't”应与过去时态一致，改为“couldn't”。

× No, I didn't think I had a good memories because when I was little, when I was young in in our Chinese class we always need to memorize some ancient poetries for preparation examination, but I can't remember at all.

✓ No, I didn't think I had good memory because when I was little, when I was young in our Chinese class we always needed to memorize some ancient poetry for preparation examination, but I couldn't remember at all.

描述过去的事情时，动词时态应使用过去式，如“need”应改为“needed”，“can't”应改为“couldn't”。

× Yes, when I was 10 years old I forgot to go my karate exam because I'm because I'm focused on playing with my friends. So I remember this very deeply.

✓ Yes, when I was 10 years old I forgot to go to my karate exam because I was focused on playing with my friends. So I remember this very deeply.

“I'm”应改为过去时“I was”；“go my karate exam”缺少介词“to”，应为“go to my karate exam”。

× Yes, when I was 10 years old I forgot to go my karate exam because I'm because I'm focused on playing with my friends. So I remember this very deeply.

✓ Yes, when I was 10 years old I forgot to go to my karate exam because I was focused on playing with my friends. So I remember this very deeply.

动词“go”后面需要介词“to”来引出目的地，缺少“to”导致介词使用错误。

× I think the most important things I need to remember in my daily life is when every time I go. Train station, have the train or go to the airport station I need to. Passport because every time I I forget.

✓ I think the most important thing I need to remember in my daily life is that every time I go to the train station, take the train or go to the airport, I need to bring my passport because every time I forget.

“things”应为单数“thing”与谓语“is”保持一致；“Train station”前应加介词“to”；“have the train”表达不准确，应改为“take the train”；“I need to. Passport”句子不完整，应补充“bring my passport”。

× I think the most important things I need to remember in my daily life is when every time I go. Train station, have the train or go to the airport station I need to. Passport because every time I I forget.

✓ I think the most important thing I need to remember in my daily life is that every time I go to the train station, take the train or go to the airport, I need to bring my passport because every time I forget.

“go”后面应加介词“to”表示方向；“go to the airport station”表达不自然，改为“go to the airport”；“have the train”应改为“take the train”。

× I usually prepare the important things before I tidy my luggage and. I come out to where I will check it again to make sure I bring the important things.

✓ I usually prepare the important things before I tidy my luggage and go out. Then I check again to make sure I bring the important things.

“come out to where I will check it again”表达不自然，应改为“go out. Then I check again”；“bring”时态应与习惯动作保持一致，使用一般现在时。